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diff --git a/chapter03/introduction.xml b/chapter03/introduction.xml index 669c89d67..6bdb5c776 100644 --- a/chapter03/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter03/introduction.xml @@ -10,13 +10,14 @@ <title>Introduction</title> - <para>This chapter includes a list of packages that need to be downloaded for - building a basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to versions - of the software that are known to work, and this book is based on their use. We - highly recommend not using newer versions because the build commands for one - version may not work with a newer version. The newest package versions may also - have problems that require work-arounds. These work-arounds will be developed - and stabilized in the development version of the book.</para> + <para>This chapter includes a list of packages that need to be downloaded in + order to build a basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to + versions of the software that are known to work, and this book is based on + their use. We highly recommend against using newer versions because the build + commands for one version may not work with a newer version. The newest package + versions may also have problems that require work-arounds. These work-arounds + will be developed and stabilized in the development version of the + book.</para> <para>Download locations may not always be accessible. If a download location has changed since this book was published, Google (<ulink @@ -34,9 +35,9 @@ located on the LFS partition and will be available during all stages of the building process.</para> - <para>To create this directory, execute, as user <systemitem - class="username">root</systemitem>, the following command before starting - the download session:</para> + <para>To create this directory, execute the following command, as user + <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>, before starting the download + session:</para> <screen role="nodump"><userinput>mkdir -v $LFS/sources</userinput></screen> |