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| -rw-r--r-- | preface/organpart1.xml | 2 |
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diff --git a/chapter01/conventions.xml b/chapter01/conventions.xml index c50b3c71d..d76c2175a 100644 --- a/chapter01/conventions.xml +++ b/chapter01/conventions.xml @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ referred to.</para></blockquote> <blockquote><para>This form of text (fixed width text) is showing screen output, probably as the result of commands issued and is also used to -show filenames such as <filename>/etc/lilo.conf</filename></para></blockquote> +show filenames such as <filename>/etc/lilo.conf</filename>.</para></blockquote> <para><emphasis>Emphasis</emphasis></para> diff --git a/chapter01/how.xml b/chapter01/how.xml index b3cd9b439..fe743db27 100644 --- a/chapter01/how.xml +++ b/chapter01/how.xml @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ system we will create a new Linux native partition and filesystem. Here is where the LFS system will be compiled and installed.</para> <para>The next step, chapter 5, will discuss the installation of a number of -packages that will form a basic development suite that is used to +packages that will form the basic development suite which is used to build the actual system, or needed to resolve circular dependencies. For example, you need a compiler to build a new compiler, and you need a shell in order to install a new shell. The packages in this chapter will be linked @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ LFS. While software is being compiled and installed you can simply switch to a different VC (Virtual Console) or X desktop and continue using your computer normally.</para> -<para>When all the software from chapter 6 is installed, chapters 7,8 and 9 +<para>When all the software from chapter 6 is installed, chapters 7, 8 and 9 will help us finalize our installation. We will set up our boot scripts in chapter 7. In chapter 8 we will build our final linux kernel and set up the Linux boot loader. Chapter 9 has some pointers to help you after diff --git a/chapter01/mirrors.xml b/chapter01/mirrors.xml index eba678ad3..db7da08b7 100644 --- a/chapter01/mirrors.xml +++ b/chapter01/mirrors.xml @@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ url="ftp://ftp.se.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs"/></para></listitem> url="http://ftp.de.linuxfromscratch.org/"/></para></listitem> <listitem><para>Freising, Germany [FTP] [4 Mbit] - <ulink -url="ftp://ftp.de.[..]/mirrors/ftp.linuxfromscratch.org/"/></para></listitem> +url="ftp://ftp.de.linuxfromscratch.org/mirrors/ftp.linuxfromscratch.org/"/></para></listitem> </itemizedlist> diff --git a/preface/organpart1.xml b/preface/organpart1.xml index 40c3641a4..5c5b331e8 100644 --- a/preface/organpart1.xml +++ b/preface/organpart1.xml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <sect2 id="pre-organ1"> <title>Part I - Introduction</title> -<para>Part I gives general information about the contents of book +<para>Part I gives general information about the contents of the book (revisions, where to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and other contact information). It also contains suggested reading that discusses a few important considerations to think about before beginning your LFS |