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@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ Coreutils: Only test the non-root stuff in Chapter 05, but test everything
in Chapter 06.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 21st, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 05 - Installing Expect:
-Don't both passing anything more than --prefix=/stage1. None of it is
+Don't bother passing anything more than --prefix=/stage1. None of it is
needed.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 16th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 06: Net-tools: Changed
@@ -225,24 +225,24 @@ Added <userinput>CPPFLAGS=-D_GNU_SOURCE</userinput> before
<listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 06 - Basic Network:
Changed the single quotes to double quotes in the echo command. Without it,
$(hostname) won't expand which defeats the sole purpose of this command -
-to make perl's hostname check work.</para></listitem>
+to make Perl's hostname check work.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [winkie]: Removed all occurrences &amp;&amp;.
Updated bug syntax. Added "make check/test" where necessary in Chapter
6.</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [winkie]: Applied "Changing ownership"
-patch to polish the text. Closes bug #511.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 06: Applied "Changing
+ownership" patch to polish the text. Closes bug #511.</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [winkie]: Applied "Configuring system
-components" patch to polish the text. Closes bug #510.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 06: Applied "Configuring
+system components" patch to polish the text. Closes bug #510.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 06: Removed TCL, Expect
and DejaGNU. Nothing uses this once past GCC in chapter 6. The versions
in /stage1/bin do the job just fine.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 06 - Installing Shadow:
-touch the /usr/bin/passwd file before installation. Not doing so results in
+Touching the /usr/bin/passwd file before installation. Not doing so results in
Shadow thinking passwd will be in /bin/passwd.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 06 - Installing Procps:
@@ -280,8 +280,8 @@ first place.</para></listitem>
gzip-1.3.5, and tar-1.13.25.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 12th, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 05 - Installing Perl:
-Add extra commands to build certain modules into Perl. This is to
-accomadate the Coreutils "make check". Partially fixes bug #528.</para></listitem>
+Added extra commands to build certain modules into Perl. This is to accomodate
+the Coreutils "make check". Partially fixes bug #528.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 12th, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 05 - Installing Gzip:
Nothing in Chapter 6 checks for or uses the uncompress command,
@@ -296,8 +296,7 @@ Lfs-Utils: Removed. The only package that checks for mktemp before it is
installed is GCC, and that's only for gccbug.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 11th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 06 - GCC-2.95.3: Added
---enable-threads=posix as well to complete the C++
-addition.</para></listitem>
+--enable-threads=posix as well to complete the C++ addition.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 11th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 06 - GCC-2.95.3: Added
--enable-languages=c,c++ to fix that gcc's version bug with regards to
@@ -397,7 +396,7 @@ gcc and compiling zlib with -fPIC).</para></listitem>
pass2, locking glibc and adjusting toolchain): Change tooldir to /stage1
(likewise we use tooldir=/usr in chapter 6).</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>May 10th, 2003 [gerard]: Chaper 05 - Kernel headers:
+<listitem><para>May 10th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 05 - Kernel headers:
Removed the usage of <userinput>cp -H</userinput> because there are
distributions out there that do not know about the
<userinput>-H</userinput> option.</para></listitem>
@@ -406,10 +405,10 @@ distributions out there that do not know about the
gcc-3.2.3-specs-3.patch.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 10th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 06 - Adjusting toolchain:
-Made it more architecture independant.</para></listitem>
+Made it more architecture-independent.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 10th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 05 - Locking in Glibc:
-Made it more architecture independant.</para></listitem>
+Made it more architecture-independent.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 7th, 2003 [gerard]: Removed GCC No Debug patches. No
longer assume gcc-core and gcc-g++ packages are downloaded, so added
@@ -424,7 +423,7 @@ Newer versions just don't work properly.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 5th, 2003 [gerard]: Removed zlib installation from
chapter 5 (its inclusion was a mistake).</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>May 5th, 2003 [gerard]: Various buf fixes that were
+<listitem><para>May 5th, 2003 [gerard]: Various bug fixes that were
introduced during the pure-lfs integration.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>May 2nd, 2003 [gerard]: Upgraded to: automake-1.7.4,