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<para>
LFS Commands is a tarball containing files which list the installation
commands for the packages installed in this book. These files can be
-used to dump to your shell and install the packages, though some files
-need to be modified (for example when you install the console-tools
-package you need to select your keyboard layout file which can't be guessed).
+used to dump to a shell and install the packages, though some files
+need to be modified (for example when the console-tools package is
+installed it is needed to select the keyboard layout file which can't be
+guessed).
</para>
<para>
These files can be used to quickly find out which commands have been
-changed between the different LFS versions as well. You can download the
+changed between the different LFS versions as well. A user just downloads the
lfs-commands tarball for this book version and the previous book version
-and run a diff on the files. That way you can see which package have
-updated installation instructions so you can modify your own scripts, or
-reinstall a package if you deem necessary.
+and run a diff on the files. That way it is possible to see which packages
+have
+updated installation instructions and he can modify his own scripts, or
+reinstall a package if it seems necessary.
</para>
<para>