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diff --git a/chapter04/introduction.xml b/chapter04/introduction.xml index 094b00c74..9ca68e984 100644 --- a/chapter04/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter04/introduction.xml @@ -2,10 +2,10 @@ <title>Introduction</title> <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html" dir="chapter03"?> -<para>Below follows a list of all the packages that you will need to -download in order to build a basic Linux system. The listed version -numbers correspond to versions of the software that are known to work and -which this book is based upon.</para> +<para>Below is a list of packages you need to download for building a +basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to versions +of the software that are known to work, and this book is based +upon them.</para> <para>All the URL's below refer to the main LFS server. There are several FTP mirrors available from which you can download the files as well. The |