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<sect1 id="ch-tools-creatingminlayout">
<?dbhtml filename="creatingminlayout.html"?>
- <title>Creating a limited directory layout in LFS filesystem</title>
+ <title>Creating a Limited Directory Layout in the LFS Filesystem</title>
<para>In this section, we begin populating the LFS filesystem with the
pieces that will constitute the final Linux system. The first step is to
@@ -41,13 +41,13 @@ esac</userinput></screen>
<note>
<para>
- LFS editors have deliberately decided not to use a
+ The LFS editors have deliberately decided not to use a
<filename class="directory">/usr/lib64</filename> directory. Several
- steps are taken so that the toolchain does not use it. If for any
+ steps are taken to be sure the toolchain will not use it. If for any
reason this directory appears (either because you made an error in
- following the instructions, or because you install a binary package that
- creates it after finishing LFS), it may break the instructions given in
- the book. You should often ensure that this directory is non-existent.
+ following the instructions, or because you installed a binary package that
+ created it after finishing LFS), it may break your system.
+ You should always be sure this directory does not exist.
</para>
</note>