4 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml b/chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml
index 1002a5d43..32d8e0008 100644
--- a/chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml
@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ you have defined any environment variables that override default
 optimizations, such as CFLAGS and CXXFLAGS, we recommend unsetting or
 modifying them when building Binutils.</para>
 
-<para>It is recommended by the Binutils installation documentation to build
-Binutils outside of the source directory in a dedicated directory:</para>
+<para>The Binutils documentation recommends building Binutils outside of the
+source directory in a dedicated build directory:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>mkdir ../binutils-build
 cd ../binutils-build</userinput></screen></para>
diff --git a/chapter05/binutils-pass2-inst.xml b/chapter05/binutils-pass2-inst.xml
index bb963f520..5317a0e55 100644
--- a/chapter05/binutils-pass2-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter05/binutils-pass2-inst.xml
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 chapter is considered not as critical as the one we run in Chapter 6.</para>
 </note>
 
-<para>First create a separate build directory again:</para>
+<para>Create a separate build directory again:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>mkdir ../binutils-build
 cd ../binutils-build</userinput></screen></para>
diff --git a/chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml b/chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml
index bf38aa96e..dccef7ffd 100644
--- a/chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml
@@ -17,8 +17,8 @@ Therefore, if you have defined any environment variables that override
 default optimizations, such as CFLAGS and CXXFLAGS, we recommend unsetting
 or modifying them when building GCC.</para>
 
-<para>It is recommended by the GCC installation documentation to build
-GCC outside of the source directory in a dedicated directory:</para>
+<para>The GCC documentation recommends building GCC outside of the source
+directory in a dedicated build directory:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>mkdir ../gcc-build
 cd ../gcc-build</userinput></screen></para>
diff --git a/chapter05/glibc-inst.xml b/chapter05/glibc-inst.xml
index e63792bec..e234235ab 100644
--- a/chapter05/glibc-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter05/glibc-inst.xml
@@ -34,8 +34,8 @@ Apply the following patch to fix this:</para>
 <para><screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../glibc-2.3.2-sscanf-1.patch
 </userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>The documentation that comes with Glibc recommends to build the package
-not in the source directory but in a separate, dedicated directory:</para>
+<para>The Glibc documentation recommends building Glibc outside of the source
+directory in a dedicated build directory:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>mkdir ../glibc-build
 cd ../glibc-build</userinput></screen></para>