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-rw-r--r--chapter06/chroot.xml10
-rw-r--r--chapter06/glibc-exp.xml2
-rw-r--r--chapter06/glibc-inst.xml6
3 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions
diff --git a/chapter06/chroot.xml b/chapter06/chroot.xml
index 212235a10..b5b9c13e8 100644
--- a/chapter06/chroot.xml
+++ b/chapter06/chroot.xml
@@ -30,17 +30,17 @@ like vim and less to operate properly.
<para>
Now that we are inside a chroot'ed environment, we can continue to
-install all the basic system software. A user has to make sure all the
+install all the basic system software. You have to make sure all the
following commands in this and following chapters are run from within the
-chroot'ed environment. If he ever leaves this environment for a reason
-(say when rebooting or something) he has to remember to mount $LFS/proc again
-like he did earlier and to re-enter chroot before continuing with the
+chroot'ed environment. If you ever leaves this environment for a reason
+(say when rebooting or something) please remember to mount $LFS/proc
+again like you just did and re-enter chroot before continuing with the
book.
</para>
<para>
Note that the bash prompt will contain "I have no name!". This is
-normal; Glibc hasn't been installed yet.
+normal because Glibc hasn't been installed yet.
</para>
</sect1>
diff --git a/chapter06/glibc-exp.xml b/chapter06/glibc-exp.xml
index 0074fea08..c1e854270 100644
--- a/chapter06/glibc-exp.xml
+++ b/chapter06/glibc-exp.xml
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ have Glibc default to using /lib and /usr/lib which is fine right now).
</para>
<para>
-<userinput>--enable-add-ons:</userinput> This enabled the add-ons that
+<userinput>--enable-add-ons:</userinput> This enables the add-on that
we install with Glibc: linuxthreads
</para>
diff --git a/chapter06/glibc-inst.xml b/chapter06/glibc-inst.xml
index 631fb26da..cd7f8bb56 100644
--- a/chapter06/glibc-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter06/glibc-inst.xml
@@ -40,9 +40,9 @@ Install Glibc by running the following commands:
</literallayout></blockquote>
<para>
-A user can get rid of the "I have no name!" in the bash prompt if he wants.
-This is done by exiting chroot and re-entering it. Run the following
-commands to do that:
+You can get rid of the "I have no name!" in the bash prompt if you want
+to by exiting chroot and re-entering it. Run the following commands to do
+that:
</para>
<blockquote><literallayout>