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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/e2fsprogs-exp.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/introduction.xml | 22 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/manpages-inst.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/shellutils-inst.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/utillinux-inst.xml | 4 |
5 files changed, 16 insertions, 16 deletions
diff --git a/chapter06/e2fsprogs-exp.xml b/chapter06/e2fsprogs-exp.xml index c7fac0bdc..69c097125 100644 --- a/chapter06/e2fsprogs-exp.xml +++ b/chapter06/e2fsprogs-exp.xml @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ reason for supplying this option is because of the setup of the e2fsprogs Makefile. Some programs are essential for system use when, for example, /usr isn't mounted (like the e2fsck program). These programs and libraries therefore belong in directories like /lib and -/sbin. If this option isn't passed to e2fsprogs' configure, it places +/sbin. If this option isn't passed to E2fsprogs's configure, it places these programs in /usr which is not what we want.</para> <para><userinput>--enable-elf-shlibs:</userinput> This creates shared diff --git a/chapter06/introduction.xml b/chapter06/introduction.xml index 2a59f604c..cfcf6fa67 100644 --- a/chapter06/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter06/introduction.xml @@ -2,24 +2,24 @@ <title>Introduction</title> <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html" dir="chapter06"?> -<para>The installation of all the software is pretty straightforward and -you will probably think it's so much easier and shorter to give the generic -installation instructions for each package and only explain how to -install something if a certain package requires an alternate installation -method. Although I agree on that, I choose to give the -full instructions for each and every package. This is simply to avoid any +<para>The installation of all the software is pretty straightforward, and +you will probably think it would be so much easier and shorter to give +the generic installation instructions for a package here and only explain +in full the installation of those packages that require an alternate +method. Although we agree with that, we choose to give the +full instructions for each and every package, simply to avoid any possible confusion and errors.</para> <para>Now would be a good time to take a look at the optimization hint -at <ulink url="&hints-root;optimization.txt"/> if you plan on using +at <ulink url="&hints-root;optimization.txt"/> if you plan to use compiler optimization for the packages -installed in the following chapter. Compiler optimization can make a program run -faster, but may also cause some compilation problems. If you run into problems -after having used optimization, always try it without optimizing to see if +installed in this chapter. Compiler optimization can make a program run +faster, but may also cause compilation problems. If you run into problems +when using optimization, always try it without optimization to see if the problem persists.</para> <para>Please refrain from installing more than one package at a time, even -if it may safe you time (especially with dual CPU machines). If you install +if it may save you time (especially with dual CPU machines). If you install the wrong package at the wrong time, it may hard-wire program paths to <filename class="directory">$LFS/static</filename> which will cause the programs to stop working once the static directory is removed. The order diff --git a/chapter06/manpages-inst.xml b/chapter06/manpages-inst.xml index a7bc14e6f..609cc0eb6 100644 --- a/chapter06/manpages-inst.xml +++ b/chapter06/manpages-inst.xml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <sect2> <title>Installation of Man-pages</title> -<para>Install Man-pages by running the following commands:</para> +<para>Install Man-pages by running the following command:</para> <para><screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen></para> diff --git a/chapter06/shellutils-inst.xml b/chapter06/shellutils-inst.xml index cbc5f41cf..24cf497d7 100644 --- a/chapter06/shellutils-inst.xml +++ b/chapter06/shellutils-inst.xml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <sect2> <title>Installation of Sh-utils</title> -<para>Install Shellutils by running the following commands:</para> +<para>Install Sh-utils by running the following commands:</para> <para><screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr && make && diff --git a/chapter06/utillinux-inst.xml b/chapter06/utillinux-inst.xml index cbf7d9e8f..b3b114ffd 100644 --- a/chapter06/utillinux-inst.xml +++ b/chapter06/utillinux-inst.xml @@ -13,9 +13,9 @@ mkdir -p /var/lib/hwclock</userinput></screen></para> </sect2> <sect2> -<title>Installation of Util-Linux</title> +<title>Installation of Util-linux</title> -<para>Install Util-Linux by running the following commands:</para> +<para>Install Util-linux by running the following commands:</para> <para><screen><userinput>./configure && make HAVE_SLN=yes && |