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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter07/network.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter07/usage.xml | 6 |
2 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/chapter07/network.xml b/chapter07/network.xml index aad5280be..b118be11d 100644 --- a/chapter07/network.xml +++ b/chapter07/network.xml @@ -54,8 +54,8 @@ BROADCAST=192.168.1.255 <para>Of course, the values of those variables have to be changed in every file to match the proper setup. If the ONBOOT variable is set -to yes, the network script will bring it up during boot up of the system. -If set to anything else but yes it will be ignored by the network script +to yes, the network script will bring it up during the booting of the system. +If set to anything else but yes, it will be ignored by the network script and thus not brought up.</para> </sect2> diff --git a/chapter07/usage.xml b/chapter07/usage.xml index 9fb37f6cd..1c7942de1 100644 --- a/chapter07/usage.xml +++ b/chapter07/usage.xml @@ -80,9 +80,9 @@ is running and with which PIDs.</para></listitem> </itemizedlist> -<para>Feel free to modify the way the boot process works (after all it's your -LFS system, not ours). The files here are just an example of how it can be -done in a nice way (well what we consider nice anyway. You may hate it).</para> +<para>Feel free to modify the way the boot process works (after all, it's your +own LFS system). The files given here are just an example of how it can be +done in a nice way (well, what we consider nice -- you may hate it).</para> </sect1> |