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@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@
<title>Rebooting the system</title>
<?dbhtml filename="reboot.html"?>
-<para>Now that all of the software has been installed, it is time to reboot
-your computer. First exit from the chroot environment:</para>
+<para>Now that all of the software has been installed, it is time to
+reboot the computer. First exit from the chroot environment:</para>
<screen><userinput>logout</userinput></screen>
@@ -20,25 +20,25 @@ umount $LFS/dev
umount $LFS/proc
umount $LFS/sys</userinput></screen>
-<para>And unmount the LFS file system:</para>
+<para>Unmount the LFS file system itself:</para>
<screen><userinput>umount $LFS</userinput></screen>
-<para>If at the start you decided to create multiple partitions, you'll need to
-unmount the other partitions before unmounting the main one, like this:</para>
+<para>If multiple partitions were created, unmount the other
+partitions before unmounting the main one, like this:</para>
<screen><userinput>umount $LFS/usr
umount $LFS/home
umount $LFS</userinput></screen>
-<para>Now reboot your system with:</para>
+<para>Now, reboot the system with:</para>
<screen><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>
<para>Assuming the Grub boot loader was set up as outlined earlier, the menu
-is set to boot <emphasis>LFS &milestone;</emphasis> automatically.</para>
+is set to boot <emphasis>LFS &version;</emphasis> automatically.</para>
-<para>When the reboot is complete, your LFS system is ready for use and you
-can start adding your own software.</para>
+<para>When the reboot is complete, the LFS system is ready for use and
+software can be added.</para>
</sect1>