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diff --git a/preface/organpart1.xml b/preface/organpart1.xml index 255fc6cda..40c3641a4 100644 --- a/preface/organpart1.xml +++ b/preface/organpart1.xml @@ -1,10 +1,11 @@ <sect2 id="pre-organ1"> <title>Part I - Introduction</title> -<para>Part One gives general information about this book (versions, where -to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and how to get in touch with us). -It also explains a few important aspects you really want and need to -read before starting to build an LFS system.</para> +<para>Part I gives general information about the contents of book +(revisions, where to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and other contact +information). It also contains suggested reading that discusses a few +important considerations to think about before beginning your LFS +system.</para> </sect2> |