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@@ -15,16 +15,16 @@ questions many people raise is, <quote>why go through all the hassle of manually
building a Linux system from scratch when you can just download and install
an existing one?</quote></para>
-<para>One important reason for this project's existence is to help you learn how
-a Linux system works from the inside out. Building an LFS system helps
-demonstrate what makes Linux tick, and how things work together and depend
-on each other. One of the best things that this learning experience can
-provide you with is the ability to customize a Linux system to suit your
-own unique needs.</para>
+<para>One important reason for this project's existence is to help you learn
+how a Linux system works from the inside out. Building an LFS system helps
+demonstrate what makes Linux tick, and how things work together and depend on
+each other. One of the best things that this learning experience can provide is
+the ability to customize a Linux system to suit your own unique needs.</para>
-<para>A key benefit of LFS is that it allows you to have more control over the
-system without relying on someone else's Linux implementation. With LFS,
-you are in the driver's seat and dictate every aspect of the system.</para>
+<para>Another key benefit of LFS is that it allows you to have more control
+over the system without relying on someone else's Linux implementation. With
+LFS, you are in the driver's seat and dictate every aspect of the
+system.</para>
<para>LFS allows you to create very compact Linux systems. When installing
regular distributions, you are often forced to install a great many
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ programs which are probably never used or understood. These programs waste
resources. You may argue that with today's hard drive and CPUs, such
resources are no longer a consideration. Sometimes, however, you are still
constrained by size considerations if nothing else. Think about bootable
-CDs, USB sticks and embedded systems. Those are areas where LFS can be
+CDs, USB sticks, and embedded systems. Those are areas where LFS can be
beneficial.</para>
<para>Another advantage of a custom built Linux system is security. By compiling
@@ -48,10 +48,10 @@ foundation-level system. If you do not wish to build your own Linux system
from scratch, you may not entirely benefit from the information in this
book.</para>
-<para>There are too many good reasons to build your own LFS system to list them
-all here. In the end, education is by far the most powerful of reasons. As
-you continue in your LFS experience, you will discover the power that
-information and knowledge truly bring.</para>
+<para>There are too many other good reasons to build your own LFS system to
+list them all here. In the end, education is by far the most powerful of
+reasons. As you continue in your LFS experience, you will discover the power
+that information and knowledge truly bring.</para>
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