From 0844c147623519a97f5b1643d680e36ebd4231ce Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Matthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Sun, 18 Nov 2012 18:14:22 +0000
Subject: A couple of text updates. Thanks to Chris Staub for the patch. Fixes
 #3228.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@10046 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter03/introduction.xml | 2 +-
 chapter06/glibc.xml        | 2 +-
 chapter06/kmod.xml         | 6 ++----
 chapter06/util-linux.xml   | 5 +++--
 general.ent                | 4 ++--
 5 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/chapter03/introduction.xml b/chapter03/introduction.xml
index 232751371..58df880cc 100644
--- a/chapter03/introduction.xml
+++ b/chapter03/introduction.xml
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
   the correct packages are available before proceeding.  Place that file in 
   <filename class="directory">$LFS/sources</filename> and run:</para>
 
-<screen role="nodump"><userinput>pushd  $LFS/sources
+<screen role="nodump"><userinput>pushd $LFS/sources
 md5sum -c md5sums
 popd</userinput></screen> 
 
diff --git a/chapter06/glibc.xml b/chapter06/glibc.xml
index 74f65a8d7..62f0a67d1 100644
--- a/chapter06/glibc.xml
+++ b/chapter06/glibc.xml
@@ -501,7 +501,7 @@ mkdir /etc/ld.so.conf.d</userinput></screen>
         /usr/include/netrom, /usr/include/netrose, /usr/include/nfs,
         /usr/include/protocols, /usr/include/rpc, /usr/include/rpcsvc,
         /usr/include/sys, /usr/lib/audit, /usr/lib/gconv, /usr/lib/glibc,
-        /usr/lib/locale, /usr/share/i18n, /usr/share/zoneinfo</seg>
+        /usr/lib/locale, /usr/share/i18n, /usr/share/zoneinfo, /var/db</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>
 
diff --git a/chapter06/kmod.xml b/chapter06/kmod.xml
index 9e1c65c55..48c1585c3 100644
--- a/chapter06/kmod.xml
+++ b/chapter06/kmod.xml
@@ -55,11 +55,9 @@
       <title>The meaning of the configure options:</title>
 
       <varlistentry>
-        <term><parameter>lib* and --with-*</parameter></term>
+        <term><parameter>--with-*</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>These options enable Kmod to handle compressed kernel modules.
-          The shell variables are required in order for the xz and zlib headers
-          and libraries to be found in the absence of pkg-config.</para>
+          <para>These options enable Kmod to handle compressed kernel modules.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
 
diff --git a/chapter06/util-linux.xml b/chapter06/util-linux.xml
index 94cf95a22..dd1195861 100644
--- a/chapter06/util-linux.xml
+++ b/chapter06/util-linux.xml
@@ -69,8 +69,9 @@ mkdir -pv /var/lib/hwclock</userinput></screen>
         <listitem>
           <para>These switches disable building su, sulogin, and login.  They
           duplicate the same programs provided by <xref
-          linkend='ch-system-shadow'/>.  They also require <ulink
-          url="&blfs-root;/view/svn/postlfs/linux-pam.html">Linux-PAM</ulink>
+          linkend='ch-system-shadow'/> and <xref linkend='ch-system-sysvinit'/>.
+          They also require
+          <ulink url="&blfs-root;/view/svn/postlfs/linux-pam.html">Linux-PAM</ulink>
           which is not available in LFS.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
diff --git a/general.ent b/general.ent
index 4cd98ea94..50f139c1c 100644
--- a/general.ent
+++ b/general.ent
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-<!ENTITY version "SVN-20121114">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "November 14, 2012">
+<!ENTITY version "SVN-20121118">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "November 18, 2012">
 <!ENTITY copyrightdate "1999-2012"><!-- jhalfs needs a literal dash, not &ndash; -->
 <!ENTITY milestone "7.3">
 <!ENTITY generic-version "development"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or "x.y[-pre{x}]" -->
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