From 19f8a620a823825993a4e910a580cd8d1ed552f6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jeremy Huntwork <jhuntwork@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Fri, 2 Mar 2007 23:23:14 +0000
Subject: Warnings and important notices about a command that appear after
 instructions to run it are evil.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@7953 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter01/changelog.xml | 10 ++++++++++
 chapter05/adjusting.xml | 20 ++++++++++----------
 2 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml
index 36f2ad6ef..647e5f6e3 100644
--- a/chapter01/changelog.xml
+++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml
@@ -36,6 +36,16 @@
     </listitem>
 -->
 
+    <listitem>
+      <para>2007-03-1</para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[jhuntwork] - Minor grammatical changes. Move some warnings and
+	  notices to appear before affected commands.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
+    </listitem>
+
     <listitem>
       <para>2007-02-25</para>
       <itemizedlist>
diff --git a/chapter05/adjusting.xml b/chapter05/adjusting.xml
index 144719698..bca6d56fb 100644
--- a/chapter05/adjusting.xml
+++ b/chapter05/adjusting.xml
@@ -32,25 +32,25 @@ ln -sv /tools/bin/ld /tools/$(gcc -dumpmachine)/bin/ld</userinput></screen>
   <para>The next task is to point GCC to the new dynamic linker. This is done by
   dumping GCC's <quote>specs</quote> file to a location where GCC will look for it
   by default. A simple <command>sed</command> substitution then alters the
-  dynamic linker that GCC will use:</para>
+  dynamic linker that GCC will use.</para>
 
-<!-- Ampersands are needed to allow copy and paste -->
-<screen><userinput>gcc -dumpspecs | sed 's@^/lib/ld-linux.so.2@/tools&amp;@g' \
-  > `dirname $(gcc -print-libgcc-file-name)`/specs</userinput></screen>
-
-  <para>It is recommended that the above command be copy-and-pasted in order to
-  ensure accuracy. Be sure to visually inspect the specs file in order to
-  verify that all occurrences of <quote>/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote> have been
-  replaced with <quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>.</para>
+  <para>For the sake of accuracy, it is recommended to use a copy-and-paste
+  method when issuing the following command. Be sure to visually inspect the
+  specs file and verify that all occurrences of <quote>/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>
+  have been replaced with <quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>.</para>
 
   <important>
     <para>If working on a platform where the name of the dynamic linker is
     something other than <filename class="libraryfile">ld-linux.so.2</filename>,
     replace <quote>ld-linux.so.2</quote> with the name of the platform's
-    dynamic linker in the above commands. Refer back to <xref
+    dynamic linker in the following commands. Refer back to <xref
     linkend="ch-tools-toolchaintechnotes" role=","/> if necessary.</para>
   </important>
 
+<!-- Ampersands are needed to allow copy and paste -->
+<screen><userinput>gcc -dumpspecs | sed 's@^/lib/ld-linux.so.2@/tools&amp;@g' \
+  > `dirname $(gcc -print-libgcc-file-name)`/specs</userinput></screen>
+
   <para>During the build process, GCC runs a script
   (<command>fixincludes</command>) that scans the system for header files
   that may need to be fixed (they might contain syntax errors, for example),
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