From 4fb90e1ec9baf1a20f09a9d9f0379314b50f6f69 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Xi Ruoyao <xry111@mengyan1223.wang>
Date: Wed, 3 Feb 2021 02:52:42 +0000
Subject: changelog: edit pierre's changes to be more clear

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@12115 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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 chapter01/changelog.xml | 12 ++++++++----
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml
index 0d550b172..db216817f 100644
--- a/chapter01/changelog.xml
+++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml
@@ -51,10 +51,14 @@
           glibc.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[pierre] - Tweaks to allow building with glibc-2.33:
-          build a "file" executable for the host before cross-compiling
-          it; replace the relinked libctf with the one that was linked
-          during "make" in binutils-pass2.</para>
+          <para>[pierre] - To allow building with newer version of glibc
+          than the host distribution, build a "file" executable for the
+          host before cross-compiling it.</para>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[pierre] - Replace the relinked libctf (which may incorrectly
+          link against libz from the host distribution) with the one that
+          was linked during "make" in binutils-pass2.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[bdubbs] - Update to bc-3.2.6. Fixes
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