From 684183e82dae108375e71ec017fd3a7c12fcc5ec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Greg Schafer <greg@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Wed, 8 Oct 2003 07:37:20 +0000
Subject: More small text adjustments.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2947 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter05/glibc-inst.xml  |  4 ++--
 chapter08/kernel-inst.xml | 13 ++++++++-----
 index.xml                 |  4 ++--
 3 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/chapter05/glibc-inst.xml b/chapter05/glibc-inst.xml
index 7385f9809..1a5e6659e 100644
--- a/chapter05/glibc-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter05/glibc-inst.xml
@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@
 
 <para>Before starting to install Glibc, you must <userinput>cd</userinput>
 into the <filename>glibc-&glibc-version;</filename> directory and unpack
-Glibc-linuxthreads in that directory, not in <filename>$LFS/tools/src</filename>
-as you would normally do.</para>
+Glibc-linuxthreads in that directory, not in the directory where you usually
+unpack all the sources.</para>
 
 <note><para>We are going to run the test suite for Glibc in this chapter.
 However, it's worth pointing out that the Glibc test suite we run in this
diff --git a/chapter08/kernel-inst.xml b/chapter08/kernel-inst.xml
index 00f6c23b1..5ef8dc406 100644
--- a/chapter08/kernel-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter08/kernel-inst.xml
@@ -26,9 +26,12 @@ in some situations. See the <filename>README</filename> file for
 more information.</para>
 
 <para>If you wish, you may skip kernel configuration by simply copying the
-kernel config file, <filename>.config</filename>, from your host system to the
-<filename class="directory">$LFS/usr/src/linux-&kernel-version;</filename>
-directory.</para>
+kernel config file, <filename>.config</filename>, from your host system
+(assuming it is available) to the unpacked
+<filename class="directory">linux-&kernel-version;</filename> directory.
+However, we don't recommend this option. You're much better off exploring all
+the configuration menus and creating your own kernel configuration from
+scratch.</para>
 
 <para>For POSIX shared memory support, ensure that the kernel config option
 "Virtual memory file system support" is enabled. It resides within the "File
@@ -49,8 +52,8 @@ systems" menu and is normally enabled by default.</para>
 <para>If you intend to use kernel modules, you will need an
 <filename>/etc/modules.conf</filename> file. Information pertaining
 to modules and to kernel configuration in general may be found in the
-kernel documentation, which is stored stored in
-<filename>/usr/src/linux-&kernel-version;/Documentation</filename>. The
+kernel documentation, which is found in the
+<filename>linux-&kernel-version;/Documentation</filename> directory. The
 modules.conf man page and the kernel HOWTO at
 <ulink url="&tldp-root;HOWTO/Kernel-HOWTO.html"/> may also be of
 interest to you.</para>
diff --git a/index.xml b/index.xml
index 6a5892ca7..b573ce5d2 100644
--- a/index.xml
+++ b/index.xml
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
 				"/usr/share/docbook/docbookx.dtd" [
 
 
-<!ENTITY version "20031007">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "October 7th, 2003">
+<!ENTITY version "20031008">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "October 8th, 2003">
 <!ENTITY nbsp " ">
 
 <!ENTITY ftp-root "ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">
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