From 6d60bfc16fbb95a775869900005a8800a6c03f2b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Sun, 18 Sep 2022 16:57:53 -0500
Subject: Chapter 11 text updates.

---
 chapter11/afterlfs.xml | 21 +++++++++------------
 chapter11/reboot.xml   |  6 +++---
 chapter11/theend.xml   |  5 ++---
 3 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/chapter11/afterlfs.xml b/chapter11/afterlfs.xml
index 4052ccdd6..743fd2e98 100644
--- a/chapter11/afterlfs.xml
+++ b/chapter11/afterlfs.xml
@@ -52,17 +52,13 @@
      </para>
 
      <para>
-        In addition to the above, there is a set of applications that are
-        suitable for all systems for system management. These applications are
-        all in the BLFS book. Not
-        all packages are needed in all environments. For example
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/dhcpcd.html">dhcpcd</ulink>,
-        is not appropriate for a server and
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/wireless_tools.html">wireless_tools</ulink>,
-        are normally only
-        useful for a laptop system. If you are not sure if a package presented
-        here is needed or not, it can either be installed now or later as the
-        need arises.
+        In addition to the above, there is a set of applications for system
+        management for all kinds of systems. These applications are all in the
+        BLFS book. Not all packages are needed in every environments For
+        example <ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/dhcpcd.html">dhcpcd</ulink>, is
+        not normally appropriate for a server and <ulink
+        url="&blfs-book;basicnet/wireless_tools.html">wireless_tools</ulink>,
+        are normally only useful for a laptop system. 
      </para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -252,7 +248,8 @@ PATH=/bin:/usr/bin:/sbin:/usr/sbin /bin/bash --login'</command></screen>
             <keycap>Alt</keycap>
             <keycap>Fx</keycap>
           </keycombo>
-          combination, where <keycap>Fx</keycap> may be <keycap>F7</keycap>.
+          combination, where <keycap>Fx</keycap> is usually 
+          <keycap>F1</keycap> but may be <keycap>F7</keycap>.
         </para>
       </note>
 
diff --git a/chapter11/reboot.xml b/chapter11/reboot.xml
index 70979a191..5eee6ca5b 100644
--- a/chapter11/reboot.xml
+++ b/chapter11/reboot.xml
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
 
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        Finally, a review of the following configuration files
+        A review of the following configuration files
         is also appropriate at this point.
       </para>
 
@@ -122,9 +122,9 @@ umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Now, reboot the system with:</para>
+  <para>Now, reboot the system.</para>
 
-<screen role="nodump"><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>
+<!--<screen role="nodump"><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>-->
 
   <para>Assuming the GRUB boot loader was set up as outlined earlier, the menu
   is set to boot <emphasis>LFS &version;</emphasis> automatically.</para>
diff --git a/chapter11/theend.xml b/chapter11/theend.xml
index 8470948a3..6f5e7e401 100644
--- a/chapter11/theend.xml
+++ b/chapter11/theend.xml
@@ -60,8 +60,7 @@ PRETTY_NAME="Linux From Scratch &version;"
 VERSION_CODENAME="&lt;your name here&gt;"
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Be sure to put some sort of customization for the fields
-  'DISTRIB_CODENAME' and 'VERSION_CODENAME' to make the system uniquely
-  yours.</para>
+  <para>Be sure to customize the fields 'DISTRIB_CODENAME' and
+  'VERSION_CODENAME' to make the system uniquely yours.</para>
 
 </sect1>
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