From 9bfaaaef197beb6a8a7cd288ae3fde65baa6e4ff Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Simon Perreault Date: Thu, 22 Mar 2001 02:58:50 +0000 Subject: Grammar fixes. git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@346 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689 --- chapter02/download.xml | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/chapter02/download.xml b/chapter02/download.xml index b6386b1ba..7744c4efe 100644 --- a/chapter02/download.xml +++ b/chapter02/download.xml @@ -2,17 +2,17 @@ How to download the software -Throughout this document I will assume that all the +Throughout this document, I will assume that all the packages that were downloaded are placed somewhere in $LFS/usr/src. I use the convention of having a $LFS/usr/src/sources directory. -Under sources I have the directory 0-9 and the directories a +Under sources, I have the directory 0-9 and the directories a through z. A package as sysvinit-2.78.tar.gz is stored under -$LFS/usr/src/sources/s/ A package as bash-2.04.tar.gz is stored under -$LFS/usr/src/sources/b/ and so forth. This convention does not have to be -followed of course, I was just giving an example. It's better to keep +$LFS/usr/src/sources/s/. A package as bash-2.04.tar.gz is stored under +$LFS/usr/src/sources/b/, and so forth. This convention does not have to be +followed, of course; I was just giving an example. It's better to keep the packages out of $LFS/usr/src and move them to a subdirectory, so we'll have a clean $LFS/usr/src directory in which we will unpack the packages and work with them. @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ downloaded, but the partition that is going to contain our LFS system isn't created yet. Therefore, the files are temporarily stored somewhere else and later copied to $LFS/usr/src/ when the chapter in which -the new partition is prepared got finished. +the new partition is prepared has been finished. -- cgit v1.2.3-54-g00ecf