From d15c80e1b48c272ccd5b4510c2c139bda30896bc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: David Bryant Date: Mon, 19 Dec 2022 13:44:36 -0600 Subject: Capitalize package names. Patch up a clumsy sentence. Change an instance of the imperative mood to the indicative. Improve the description of the "halt" and "init" programs. --- chapter08/sysklogd.xml | 8 ++++---- chapter08/sysvinit.xml | 16 ++++++++-------- 2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/chapter08/sysklogd.xml b/chapter08/sysklogd.xml index 9aec7ba9b..89fc314ed 100644 --- a/chapter08/sysklogd.xml +++ b/chapter08/sysklogd.xml @@ -23,8 +23,8 @@ - <para>The sysklogd package contains programs for logging system messages, - such as those given by the kernel when unusual things happen.</para> + <para>The Sysklogd package contains programs for logging system messages, + such as those emitted by the kernel when unusual things happen.</para> <segmentedlist> <segtitle>&buildtime;</segtitle> @@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ <sect2 role="installation"> <title>Installation of Sysklogd - First, fix problems that causes a segmentation fault under - some conditions in klogd and fix an obsolete program construct: + First, fix a problem that causes a segmentation fault in klogd + under some conditions, and fix an obsolete program construct: sed -i '/Error loading kernel symbols/{n;n;d}' ksym_mod.c sed -i 's/union wait/int/' syslogd.c diff --git a/chapter08/sysvinit.xml b/chapter08/sysvinit.xml index 0d6914a45..7b31ec007 100644 --- a/chapter08/sysvinit.xml +++ b/chapter08/sysvinit.xml @@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ fstab-decode - Run a command with fstab-encoded arguments + Runs a command with fstab-encoded arguments fstab-decode @@ -126,10 +126,10 @@ halt Normally invokes shutdown with the - -h option, except when already in run-level 0, - then it tells the kernel to halt the system; it notes in the - file /var/log/wtmp that the system is being - brought down + -h option, but when already in run-level 0, + it tells the kernel to halt the system; it notes in the + file /var/log/wtmp that the system is + going down halt @@ -140,8 +140,8 @@ init The first process to be started when the kernel has initialized - the hardware which takes over the boot process and starts all the - proceses specified in its configuration file + the hardware; it takes over the boot process and starts all the + processes specified in its configuration file init @@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ killall5 Sends a signal to all processes, except the processes in its own - session so it will not kill its parent shell + session; it will not kill its parent shell killall5 -- cgit v1.2.3-54-g00ecf