From fe3130ace4e4d0798897eb1d7526a76b3372cee6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Matthew Burgess Date: Thu, 16 Jun 2005 19:53:42 +0000 Subject: Chapter 7 typo and markup fixes git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6023 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689 --- chapter01/changelog.xml | 3 +++ chapter07/console.xml | 3 ++- chapter07/hostname.xml | 5 +++-- chapter07/inputrc.xml | 5 +++-- chapter07/profile.xml | 2 +- chapter07/setclock.xml | 2 +- chapter07/udev.xml | 4 ++-- 7 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml index 795a607b7..316f896ea 100644 --- a/chapter01/changelog.xml +++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml @@ -88,6 +88,9 @@ First a summary, then a detailed log. +June 16th, 2005 [matthew]: Typo and markup fixes in +chapter 7, as reported by Randy McMurchy. + June 16th, 2005 [jhuntwork]: Adjusted description of the patch package. Thanks Randy McMurchy. diff --git a/chapter07/console.xml b/chapter07/console.xml index d67cc868d..9d2d47948 100644 --- a/chapter07/console.xml +++ b/chapter07/console.xml @@ -27,7 +27,8 @@ for several countries was installed with the LFS-Bootscripts package, so the relevant section can be uncommented if the country is supported. If still in doubt, look in the /usr/share/kbd directory for valid -keymaps and screen fonts. Read the loadkeys and setfont manual pages +keymaps and screen fonts. Read the loadkeys and +setfont manual pages and determine the correct arguments for these programs. Once decided, create the configuration file with the following command: diff --git a/chapter07/hostname.xml b/chapter07/hostname.xml index 46c083a43..4d336e5b7 100644 --- a/chapter07/hostname.xml +++ b/chapter07/hostname.xml @@ -11,8 +11,9 @@ localnet configuring -Part of the localnet script is setting up the system's hostname. This -needs to be configured in the /etc/sysconfig/network. +Part of the localnet script is setting up the system's +hostname. This needs to be configured in the +/etc/sysconfig/network file. Create the /etc/sysconfig/network file and enter a hostname by running: diff --git a/chapter07/inputrc.xml b/chapter07/inputrc.xml index 200f9a31b..842f35929 100644 --- a/chapter07/inputrc.xml +++ b/chapter07/inputrc.xml @@ -15,8 +15,9 @@ used by Readline, the input-related library used by Bash and most other shells. -For more information, see the bash info page, section -Readline Init File. The readline info page is +For more information, see the bash info page, section +Readline Init File. The +readline info page is also a good source of information. Global values are set in /etc/inputrc. diff --git a/chapter07/profile.xml b/chapter07/profile.xml index 7288dfb77..00e8bcab2 100644 --- a/chapter07/profile.xml +++ b/chapter07/profile.xml @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ The shell program /bin/bash (hereafter referred to as the shell) uses a collection of startup files to help create an environment to run in. Each file has a -specific use and may effect login and interactive environments +specific use and may affect login and interactive environments differently. The files in the /etc directory provide global settings. If an equivalent file exists in the home directory, it may override diff --git a/chapter07/setclock.xml b/chapter07/setclock.xml index 0527fac00..a5a43f6a0 100644 --- a/chapter07/setclock.xml +++ b/chapter07/setclock.xml @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ configuring The setclock script reads the time from the hardware clock, -also known as BIOS or the Complementary Metal Oxide Semiconductor +also known as the BIOS or the Complementary Metal Oxide Semiconductor (CMOS) clock. If the hardware clock is set to UTC, this script will convert the hardware clock's time to the local time using the /etc/localtime file (which tells the hwclock program which timezone the diff --git a/chapter07/udev.xml b/chapter07/udev.xml index aef508e2d..ff50e7161 100644 --- a/chapter07/udev.xml +++ b/chapter07/udev.xml @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ with sysfs as they are detected by the kernel. For drivers compiled as modules, this will happen when the module is loaded. Once the sysfs filesystem is mounted (on -/sys), the data which the +/sys), data which the built-in drivers registered with sysfs are available to userspace processes and to udev for device node creation. @@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ the appropriate kernel module to load. With udev, this method will not work because the device node does not exist until the module is loaded. To solve this, the S05modules bootscript was added to the -lfs-bootscripts package, along with the +LFS-Bootscripts package, along with the /etc/sysconfig/modules file. By adding module names to the modules file, these modules will be -- cgit v1.2.3-54-g00ecf