From 2c094d60db777dce20fd4eccf4996299c2a0dfe0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Timothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Sat, 28 Sep 2002 21:08:29 +0000
Subject: Applied Bill Maltby's grammar patch. Changed $LFS to LFS where
 appropriate. Internal XML cleanup: removed double spacing where appropriate.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2138 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 appendixa/e2fsprogs-desc.xml | 26 +++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

(limited to 'appendixa/e2fsprogs-desc.xml')

diff --git a/appendixa/e2fsprogs-desc.xml b/appendixa/e2fsprogs-desc.xml
index f92a1b408..cd20916c5 100644
--- a/appendixa/e2fsprogs-desc.xml
+++ b/appendixa/e2fsprogs-desc.xml
@@ -20,12 +20,12 @@ partition).</para></sect4>
 system.</para></sect4>
 
 <sect4><title>compile_et</title>
-<para>compile_et is used to convert a table listing error-code names
-and associated messages into a C source file suitable for use with the 
-com_err library.</para></sect4>
+<para>compile_et is used to convert a table, listing error-code names
+and associated messages, into a C source file that is suitable for use
+with the com_err library.</para></sect4>
 
 <sect4><title>debugfs</title>
-<para>The debugfs program is a file system debugger. It can be used  to examine 
+<para>The debugfs program is a file system debugger. It can be used to examine 
 and change the state of an ext2 file system.</para></sect4>
 
 <sect4><title>dumpe2fs</title>
@@ -33,11 +33,11 @@ and change the state of an ext2 file system.</para></sect4>
 filesystem present on a specified device.</para></sect4>
 
 <sect4><title>e2fsck and fsck.ext2</title>
-<para>e2fsck is used to check and optionally repair Linux second
-extended filesystems. fsck.ext2 does the same as e2fsck.</para></sect4>
+<para>e2fsck and fsck.ext2 are used to check, and optionally repair, Linux
+second extended filesystems.</para></sect4>
 
 <sect4><title>e2image</title>
-<para>e2image is used to save critical ext2 filesystem data to 
+<para>e2image is used to save critical ext2 filesystem data to
 a file.</para></sect4>
 
 <sect4><title>e2label</title>
@@ -45,11 +45,11 @@ a file.</para></sect4>
 filesystem located on the specified device.</para></sect4>
 
 <sect4><title>fsck</title>
-<para>fsck is used to check and optionally repair a Linux 
-file system.</para></sect4>
+<para>fsck is used to check, and optionally repair, a Linux file
+system.</para></sect4>
 
 <sect4><title>fsck.ext3</title>
-<para>fsck.ext3 is used to check and optionally repair a Linux ext3 
+<para>fsck.ext3 is used to check, and optionally repair, a Linux ext3 
 filesystems.</para></sect4>
 
 <sect4><title>lsattr</title>
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ file system.</para></sect4>
 
 <sect4><title>mk_cmds</title>
 <para>The mk_cmds utility takes a command table file as input and produces
-a C source file as output which is intended to be used with the subsystem
+a C source file as output, which is intended to be used with the subsystem
 library, libss.</para></sect4>
 
 <sect4><title>mke2fs and mkfs.ext2</title>
@@ -84,8 +84,8 @@ filesystem.</para></sect4>
 <sect4><title>uuidgen</title>
 <para>The uuidgen program creates a new universally unique identifier (UUID) 
 using the libuuid library. The new UUID can reasonably be considered unique 
-among all UUIDs created on the local system, and among UUIDs created on other
-systems in the past and in the future.</para></sect4>
+among all UUIDs created, on the local system and on other
+systems, in the past and in the future.</para></sect4>
 
 </sect3>
 
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