From 51c7e26fb0ed51914d4e2843e82d4a87ed98478a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Alex Gronenwoud <alex@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Thu, 9 Oct 2003 22:35:55 +0000
Subject: Minor brush-ups, and splitting the basic-net section.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2956 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter01/contactinfo.xml | 22 ++++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter01/contactinfo.xml')

diff --git a/chapter01/contactinfo.xml b/chapter01/contactinfo.xml
index 9da1994ce..5129b6f34 100644
--- a/chapter01/contactinfo.xml
+++ b/chapter01/contactinfo.xml
@@ -6,21 +6,23 @@
 <sect2 id="ch01-faq">
 <title>FAQ</title>
 
-<para>If you encounter any errors, have any questions, or if you find a
-typo in the book, then, please consult the FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions)
-page at <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/"/>.</para>
+<para>If during the building of your LFS system you encounter any errors, or
+have any questions, or think you found a typo in the book, then please first
+consult the FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions) at
+<ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/"/>.</para>
 
 </sect2>
 
+
 <sect2 id="ch01-irc">
 <title>IRC</title>
 
-<para>Members of the LFS community offer assistance on our community IRC
-server.  If you decide to utilize this mode of support, we ask that you
-at least ensure you've checked the LFS FAQ and the mailing list archives
-for the answer to your question.  You can find the IRC server at
-irc.linuxfromscratch.org port 6667.  The support channel is named
-#LFS-support.</para>
+<para>Several members of the LFS community offer assistance on our community
+IRC server. Before you utilize this mode of support, we ask that you've
+at least checked the LFS FAQ and the mailing list archives for the answer to
+your question.  You can find the IRC server at
+<emphasis>irc.linuxfromscratch.org</emphasis> port 6667.  The support channel
+is named #LFS-support.</para>
 
 </sect2>
 
@@ -29,7 +31,7 @@ irc.linuxfromscratch.org port 6667.  The support channel is named
 <title>Mailing lists</title>
 
 <para>The <emphasis>linuxfromscratch.org</emphasis> server is hosting a number
-of mailinglists used for the development of the LFS project. These lists
+of mailing lists used for the development of the LFS project. These lists
 include, among others, the main development and support lists.</para>
 
 <para>For information on which lists are available, how to subscribe to them,
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