From fc8a87f18eb7d2bcd66ea19c089613c36fe8d8c3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Matthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Wed, 6 Jul 2005 17:56:57 +0000
Subject: Minor rewordings

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6410 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter01/askforhelp.xml | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter01')

diff --git a/chapter01/askforhelp.xml b/chapter01/askforhelp.xml
index e1bf648d1..136d965dd 100644
--- a/chapter01/askforhelp.xml
+++ b/chapter01/askforhelp.xml
@@ -46,18 +46,18 @@ problem.</para></note>
 <sect2>
 <title>Configure Script Problems</title>
 
-<para>If something goes wrong during the stage where the
-<command>configure</command> script is run, review the
-<filename>config.log</filename> file. This file may contain errors encountered
-during <command>configure</command> which were not printed to the screen.
-Include those relevant lines if you need to ask for help.</para>
+<para>If something goes wrong while running the <command>configure</command>
+script is run, review the <filename>config.log</filename> file. This file may
+contain errors encountered during <command>configure</command> which were not
+printed to the screen.  Include those <emphasis>relevant</emphasis> lines if you
+need to ask for help.</para>
 </sect2>
 
 <sect2>
 <title>Compilation Problems</title>
 
 <para>Both the screen output and the contents of various files are
-useful in determining the cause of compilation issues. The screen output
+useful in determining the cause of compilation problems. The screen output
 from the <command>./configure</command> script and the 
 <command>make</command> run can be helpful. It
 is not necessary to include the entire output, but do include enough
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