From 0c396df9014abb38d99753a0c57149cece56c596 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Gerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Sat, 14 Apr 2001 01:10:15 +0000
Subject: Grammar updates (mostly)

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@487 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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 chapter03/creatingfs.xml | 22 ++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter03/creatingfs.xml')

diff --git a/chapter03/creatingfs.xml b/chapter03/creatingfs.xml
index 04263cb5f..30b3c455a 100644
--- a/chapter03/creatingfs.xml
+++ b/chapter03/creatingfs.xml
@@ -3,26 +3,20 @@
 
 <para>
 Once the partition is created, we have to create a new file system on
-that partition. To create an ext2 file system, use the mke2fs command. 
-To create a reiser file system, the mkreiserfs command should be used. 
-The new partition is used as the only option to the command and the file 
-system is created. If the partition is hda11 and ext2 is to be created, 
-run the following:
+that partition. The standard file system used these days is the ext2
+file system, but the socalled journaling file systems are becoming
+increasingly popular too. It's of course up to you to decide which file
+system you want to create, but because we have to assume and work with
+something, we will assume you chose the ext2 file system.
 </para>
 
-<blockquote><literallayout>
-
-	<userinput>mke2fs /dev/xxx</userinput>
-
-</literallayout></blockquote>
-
-<para>
-To create a reiser file system, run the following:
+To create an ext2 file system, use the mke2fs command. The LFS partition
+is used as the only option to the command and the file system is created.
 </para>
 
 <blockquote><literallayout>
 
-	<userinput>mkreiserfs /dev/xxx</userinput>
+	<userinput>mke2fs /dev/xxx</userinput>
 
 </literallayout></blockquote>
 
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