From 728ea56c70a6f40317c239374acec6b4e3367ca4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Gerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Fri, 23 Mar 2001 03:13:31 +0000
Subject: Text update

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@358 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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 chapter03/mounting.xml | 28 +++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter03/mounting.xml')

diff --git a/chapter03/mounting.xml b/chapter03/mounting.xml
index b6a7e6781..786945bcb 100644
--- a/chapter03/mounting.xml
+++ b/chapter03/mounting.xml
@@ -1,15 +1,14 @@
-<sect1 id="ch04-mountingpart">
+<sect1 id="ch04-mounting">
 <title>Mounting the new partition</title>
 
 <para>
-Now that we have created the ext2 file system, it is ready for use. All we have
-to do to be able to access it (as in reading from and writing date to it) is
-mounting it. If it is mounted under /mnt/lfs, this partition can be accessed 
-by going to the /mnt/lfs directory and then doing whatever needed to do. This
-book will assume that the partition was mounted on a subdirectory
-under /mnt. It doesn't matter which directory is chosen, the user just has 
-to make sure
-that he remembers what he chose.
+Now that we have created a file system, it is ready for use. All we have
+to do to be able to access it (as in reading data from and writing data to 
+it) is mounting it. If it is mounted under /mnt/lfs, this partition can 
+be accessed by going to the /mnt/lfs directory and then doing whatever 
+needed to do. This book will assume that the partition was mounted 
+under /mnt/lfs. It doesn't matter which directory is chosen, the 
+user just has to make sure that he remembers what he chose.
 </para>
 
 <para>
@@ -33,15 +32,14 @@ Now mount the LFS partition by running:
 </literallayout></blockquote>
 
 <para>
-Replace <quote>xxx</quote> by the partition's designation.
+Replace <quote>xxx</quote> by the partition's designation (like hda11).
 </para>
 
 <para>
-This directory (/mnt/lfs) is the $LFS variable I have written about earlier.
-So if the user somewhere reads to "cp inittab $LFS/etc" he actually will type
-<quote>cp inittab /mnt/lfs/etc</quote>. Or if he wants to use the $LFS
-environment variable, <userinput>export LFS=/mnt/lfs</userinput> has to be 
-executed now.  </para>
+This directory (/mnt/lfs) is the $LFS variable you have read about earlier.
+If you were planning to make use of the $LFS environment variable, 
+<userinput>export LFS=/mnt/lfs</userinput> has to be executed now.
+</para>
 
 </sect1>
 
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