From 663ecfcc5f04e7c2860b83ef89e49f5e8b68bbbe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Archaic Date: Wed, 29 Jun 2005 16:24:16 +0000 Subject: Several minor wording changes (chapters 1 - 5). git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6232 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689 --- chapter03/introduction.xml | 21 ++++++++------------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) (limited to 'chapter03') diff --git a/chapter03/introduction.xml b/chapter03/introduction.xml index 5791720a5..82fd0d8ec 100644 --- a/chapter03/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter03/introduction.xml @@ -7,22 +7,17 @@ Introduction -This chapter includes a list of packages that need to be -downloaded for building a basic Linux system. The listed version numbers -correspond to versions of the software that are known to work, and -this book is based on their use. We highly recommend not using newer -versions because the build commands for one version may not work with -a newer version. The newest package versions may also have problems -that work-arounds have not been developed for yet. - -All the URLs, when possible, refer to the package's information -page at . The Freshmeat pages -provide easy access to official download sites, as well as project -websites, mailing lists, FAQ, changelogs, and more. +This chapter includes a list of packages that need to be downloaded for +building a basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to versions +of the software that are known to work, and this book is based on their use. We +highly recommend not using newer versions because the build commands for one +version may not work with a newer version. The newest package versions may also +have problems that require work-arounds. These work-arounds will be developed +and stabilized in the SVN version of the book. Download locations may not always be accessible. If a download location has changed since this book was published, Google () provides a useful search engine for +url="http://www.google.com/"/>) provides a useful search engine for most packages. If this search is unsuccessful, try one of the alternate means of downloading discussed at . -- cgit v1.2.3-54-g00ecf