From da6e70fffedcafb3a31e906155eed21199a71b44 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com>
Date: Sat, 26 Nov 2022 12:26:21 -0600
Subject: Edited Pierre's recent additons,to improve English idiom. Also
 corrected capitalization of a title.

---
 chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter04')

diff --git a/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml b/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml
index cab023a49..90c825577 100644
--- a/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml
+++ b/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 <sect1 id="ch-tools-creatingminlayout">
   <?dbhtml filename="creatingminlayout.html"?>
 
-  <title>Creating a limited directory layout in LFS filesystem</title>
+  <title>Creating a Limited Directory Layout in the LFS Filesystem</title>
 
   <para>In this section, we begin populating the LFS filesystem with the
   pieces that will constitute the final Linux system. The first step is to
@@ -41,13 +41,13 @@ esac</userinput></screen>
 
   <note>
     <para>
-      LFS editors have deliberately decided not to use a
+      The LFS editors have deliberately decided not to use a
       <filename class="directory">/usr/lib64</filename> directory.  Several
-      steps are taken so that the toolchain does not use it. If for any
+      steps are taken to be sure the toolchain will not use it. If for any
       reason this directory appears (either because you made an error in
-      following the instructions, or because you install a binary package that
-      creates it after finishing LFS), it may break the instructions given in
-      the book. You should often ensure that this directory is non-existent.
+      following the instructions, or because you installed a binary package that
+      created it after finishing LFS), it may break your system.
+      You should always be sure this directory does not exist.
     </para>
   </note>
 
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