From 6dff9ef949bb3567b543ee1cb0bdd0f309fa56bf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com>
Date: Thu, 3 Nov 2022 19:24:54 -0500
Subject: Edit English idiom. punctuation, etc., throughout chapter 6.

---
 chapter06/binutils-pass2.xml | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter06/binutils-pass2.xml')

diff --git a/chapter06/binutils-pass2.xml b/chapter06/binutils-pass2.xml
index 8766b71e9..ef5c18433 100644
--- a/chapter06/binutils-pass2.xml
+++ b/chapter06/binutils-pass2.xml
@@ -45,9 +45,9 @@
 
     <!-- Don't remove this until Binutils upstream updates the libtool
          copy.  On some host distros the issue doesn't show up.  -->
-    <para>Binutils ships an outdated libtool copy in the tarball.  It lacks
-    sysroot support so the produced binaries will be mistakenly linked to
-    libraries from the host distro.  Workaround this issue:</para>
+    <para>Binutils ships an outdated copy of libtool in the tarball.  It lacks
+    sysroot support, so the produced binaries will be mistakenly linked to
+    libraries from the host distro.  Work around this issue:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed '6009s/$add_dir//' -i ltmain.sh</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -83,8 +83,8 @@ cd       build</userinput></screen>
       <varlistentry>
         <term><parameter>--enable-64-bit-bfd</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Enables 64-bit support (on hosts with narrower word sizes).
-          May not be needed on 64-bit systems, but does no harm.</para>
+          <para>Enables 64-bit support (on hosts with smaller word sizes).
+          This may not be needed on 64-bit systems, but it does no harm.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
 
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