From bc2136ecacbb2f5d6d888fdf1e0432f052a3e0f4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Archaic <archaic@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Thu, 16 Jun 2005 16:47:40 +0000
Subject: Several minor grammatical fixes. Thanks to Randy and Steve.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6011 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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 chapter06/coreutils.xml | 9 ++++-----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter06/coreutils.xml')

diff --git a/chapter06/coreutils.xml b/chapter06/coreutils.xml
index d2786179f..00de6addf 100644
--- a/chapter06/coreutils.xml
+++ b/chapter06/coreutils.xml
@@ -51,13 +51,12 @@ installed by other packages:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>The test suite of Coreutils makes several assumptions about the
-presence of files and users that are not valid this early in the LFS
-build. Therefore, additional items need to be set up before running
-the tests. Skip down to <quote>Install the package</quote> if
+<para>The test suite of Coreutils makes several invalid assumptions about the
+presence of system users and groups. Therefore, additional items need to be set
+up before running the tests. Skip down to <quote>Install the package</quote> if
 not running the test suite.</para>
 
-<para>Create two dummy groups and a dummy user name:</para>
+<para>Create two dummy groups and a dummy user:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>echo "dummy1:x:1000:" &gt;&gt; /etc/group
 echo "dummy2:x:1001:dummy" &gt;&gt; /etc/group
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