From 0d84af1cbb0dc825db3e965d5126e5b08f878067 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Thu, 28 Dec 2017 03:52:38 +0000
Subject: Typos and wording changes

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@11343 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter06/dbus.xml | 24 ++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter06/dbus.xml')

diff --git a/chapter06/dbus.xml b/chapter06/dbus.xml
index 8b7b6a582..06b66851e 100644
--- a/chapter06/dbus.xml
+++ b/chapter06/dbus.xml
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</useri
       <varlistentry id="dbus-cleanup-sockets">
         <term><command>dbus-cleanup-sockets</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is used to clean up leftover sockets in a directory</para>
+          <para>Used to clean up leftover sockets in a directory</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-cleanup-sockets">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-cleanup-sockets">dbus-cleanup-sockets</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</useri
       <varlistentry id="dbus-daemon">
         <term><command>dbus-daemon</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is the D-Bus message bus daemon</para>
+          <para>The D-Bus message bus daemon</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-daemon">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-daemon">dbus-daemon</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</useri
       <varlistentry id="dbus-launch">
         <term><command>dbus-launch</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>starts <command>dbus-daemon</command> from a shell
+          <para>Starts <command>dbus-daemon</command> from a shell
           script</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-launch">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-launch">dbus-launch</primary>
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</useri
       <varlistentry id="dbus-monitor">
         <term><command>dbus-monitor</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>monitors messages passing through a D-Bus message bus</para>
+          <para>Monitors messages passing through a D-Bus message bus</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-monitor">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-monitor">dbus-monitor</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</useri
       <varlistentry id="dbus-run-session">
         <term><command>dbus-run-session</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>starts a session bus instance of <command>dbus-daemon</command>
+          <para>Starts a session bus instance of <command>dbus-daemon</command>
           from a shell script and starts a specified program in that
           session</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-run-session">
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</useri
       <varlistentry id="dbus-send">
         <term><command>dbus-send</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>sends a message to a D-Bus message bus</para>
+          <para>Sends a message to a D-Bus message bus</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-send">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-send">dbus-send</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -188,8 +188,8 @@ ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</useri
       <varlistentry id="dbus-test-tool">
         <term><command>dbus-test-tool</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is a tool to help packages test
-          <application>D-Bus</application>.</para>
+          <para>A tool to help packages test
+          <application>D-Bus</application></para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-test-tool">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-test-tool">dbus-test-tool</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -200,8 +200,8 @@ ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</useri
       <varlistentry id="dbus-update-activation-environment">
         <term><command>dbus-update-activation-environment</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>updates environment variables that will be set for
-          <application>D-Bus</application> session services.</para>
+          <para>Updates environment variables that will be set for
+          <application>D-Bus</application> session services</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-update-activation-environment">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-update-activation-environment">dbus-update-activation-environment</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</useri
       <varlistentry id="dbus-uuidgen">
         <term><command>dbus-uuidgen</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>generates a universally unique ID</para>
+          <para>Generates a universally unique ID</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-uuidgen">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-uuidgen">dbus-uuidgen</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</useri
       <varlistentry id="libdbus-1">
         <term><filename class="libraryfile">libdbus-1</filename></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>contains API functions used to communicate with the D-Bus
+          <para>Contains API functions used to communicate with the D-Bus
           message bus</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus libdbus-1">
             <primary sortas="c-libdbus-1">libdbus-1</primary>
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