From 2645ec62a379849fbb2a5905dd33aca6d238f677 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Archaic <archaic@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Thu, 30 Jun 2005 14:49:44 +0000
Subject: Several minor wording changes in chapter 6 (matt).

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6249 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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 chapter06/glibc.xml | 17 +++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter06/glibc.xml')

diff --git a/chapter06/glibc.xml b/chapter06/glibc.xml
index ab854be82..0420f91bc 100644
--- a/chapter06/glibc.xml
+++ b/chapter06/glibc.xml
@@ -110,8 +110,9 @@ Certain optimization settings are also known to be a factor here.</para></listit
 host system issues. The exact reasons are not yet clear.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>If you have mounted the LFS partition with the
-<parameter>noatime</parameter> option, the <emphasis>atime</emphasis>
-test will fail.  This is not critical.</para></listitem>
+<parameter>noatime</parameter> option, the <emphasis>atime</emphasis> test will
+fail. As mentioned in <xref linkend="space-mounting"/>, do not use the
+<parameter>noatime</parameter> option while building LFS.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>When running on older and slower hardware, some tests
 can fail because of test timeouts being exceeded.</para></listitem>
@@ -189,10 +190,10 @@ on the threading API (applicable to NPTL as well):</para>
 <indexterm zone="conf-glibc"><primary sortas="e-/etc/nsswitch.conf">/etc/nsswitch.conf</primary></indexterm>
 <indexterm zone="conf-glibc"><primary sortas="e-/etc/localtime">/etc/localtime</primary></indexterm>
 
-<para>The <filename>/etc/nsswitch.conf</filename> file needs to be
-created because, although Glibc provides defaults when this file is
-missing or corrupt, the Glibc defaults do not work well with
-networking. The time zone also needs to be set up.</para>
+<para>The <filename>/etc/nsswitch.conf</filename> file needs to be created
+because, although Glibc provides defaults when this file is missing or corrupt,
+the Glibc defaults do not work well in a networked environment. The time zone
+also needs to be configured.</para>
 
 <para>Create a new file <filename>/etc/nsswitch.conf</filename> by running the
 following:</para>
@@ -228,8 +229,8 @@ running:</para>
 <screen><userinput>cp --remove-destination /usr/share/zoneinfo/<replaceable>[xxx]</replaceable> \
     /etc/localtime</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Replace <replaceable>[xxx]</replaceable> with the name of the time zone that the
-<command>tzselect</command> provided (e.g., Canada/Eastern).</para>
+<para>Replace <replaceable>[xxx]</replaceable> with the name of the time zone
+that <command>tzselect</command> provided (e.g., Canada/Eastern).</para>
 
 <para>The meaning of the cp option:</para>
 
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