From 3a5ffda46b0039d85cab780961b686017b74007d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Manuel Canales Esparcia <manuel@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Mon, 11 Apr 2005 18:56:07 +0000
Subject: Tags and text corrections.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@4899 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter06/hotplug.xml | 30 +++++++++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter06/hotplug.xml')

diff --git a/chapter06/hotplug.xml b/chapter06/hotplug.xml
index d0e86e473..ac382408f 100644
--- a/chapter06/hotplug.xml
+++ b/chapter06/hotplug.xml
@@ -54,7 +54,8 @@ that reason, remove the network hotplug agent:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>touch /var/log/hotplug/events</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Create a directory for storing firmware that can be loaded by hotplug:</para>
+<para>Create a directory for storing firmware that can be loaded by 
+<command>hotplug</command>:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>mkdir /lib/firmware</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -83,7 +84,7 @@ that reason, remove the network hotplug agent:</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug"><primary
 sortas="b-hotplug">hotplug</primary></indexterm>
 <para>This script is called by default by the Linux kernel when something
-changes in its internal state (e.g., a new device is added or removed).</para>
+changes in its internal state (e.g., a new device is added or removed)</para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
@@ -97,7 +98,7 @@ hardware already present during system startup.  They are called by the
 <filename>hotplug</filename> initscript that comes from the LFS-Bootscripts
 package.  The <command>*.rc</command> scripts try to recover hotplug events that
 were lost during system boot because, for example, the root filesystem was not
-mounted by the kernel.</para>
+mounted by the kernel</para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
@@ -109,8 +110,7 @@ sortas="d-/etc/hotplug/*.agent">/etc/hotplug/*.agent</primary></indexterm>
 <para>These scripts are called by <command>hotplug</command>
 in response to different types of hotplug events generated by the kernel.
 Their action is to insert corresponding kernel modules and call any
-user-provided scripts.
-</para>
+user-provided scripts</para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
@@ -120,8 +120,7 @@ user-provided scripts.
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-blacklist"><primary
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/blacklist">/etc/hotplug/blacklist</primary></indexterm>
 <para>This file contains the list of modules that should never be inserted into
-the kernel by the hotplug scripts.
-</para>
+the kernel by the Hotplug scripts</para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
@@ -131,8 +130,7 @@ the kernel by the hotplug scripts.
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-functions"><primary
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/hotplug.functions">/etc/hotplug/hotplug.functions</primary></indexterm>
 <para>This file contains common functions used by other scripts in the Hotplug
-package.
-</para>
+package</para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
@@ -141,8 +139,7 @@ package.
 <listitem>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-subdirs"><primary
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/{pci,usb}">/etc/hotplug/{pci,usb}</primary></indexterm>
-<para>These directories contain user-written handlers for hotplug events.
-</para>
+<para>These directories contain user-written handlers for hotplug events</para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
@@ -152,8 +149,7 @@ sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/{pci,usb}">/etc/hotplug/{pci,usb}</primary></indexterm>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-usb.usermap"><primary
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/usb.usermap">/etc/hotplug/usb.usermap</primary></indexterm>
 <para>This file contains rules that determine which user-defined handlers to
-call for each USB device, based on its vendor ID and other attributes.
-</para>
+call for each USB device, based on its vendor ID and other attributes</para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
@@ -164,7 +160,7 @@ call for each USB device, based on its vendor ID and other attributes.
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug.d">/etc/hotplug.d</primary></indexterm>
 <para>This directory contains programs (or symlinks to them) that are interested
 in receiving hotplug events. For example, <application>Udev</application> puts
-its symlink here during installation.</para>
+its symlink here during installation</para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
@@ -174,7 +170,7 @@ its symlink here during installation.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-firmware"><primary
 sortas="e-/lib/firmware">/lib/firmware</primary></indexterm>
 <para>This directory contains the firmware for devices that need to have their
-firmware loaded before use.</para>
+firmware loaded before use</para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
@@ -183,8 +179,8 @@ firmware loaded before use.</para>
 <listitem>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-events"><primary
 sortas="e-/var/log/hotplug/events">/var/log/hotplug/events</primary></indexterm>
-<para>This file contains all the events that hotplug has called since bootup.
-</para>
+<para>This file contains all the events that <command>hotplug</command> has 
+called since bootup</para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
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