From 28bb06349a8295a09322f70de6f72ca83282a168 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jeremy Huntwork <jhuntwork@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Mon, 30 Jan 2006 06:51:33 +0000
Subject: Various textual corrections. Thanks Chris Staub.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@7317 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter06/binutils.xml       | 29 +++++++++++++++++++----------
 chapter06/changingowner.xml  |  5 ++---
 chapter06/strippingagain.xml |  2 +-
 chapter06/vim.xml            |  2 +-
 4 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter06')

diff --git a/chapter06/binutils.xml b/chapter06/binutils.xml
index 7c25fe1f9..c5f7926b7 100644
--- a/chapter06/binutils.xml
+++ b/chapter06/binutils.xml
@@ -59,16 +59,25 @@ cd ../binutils-build</userinput></screen>
 
 <screen><userinput>make tooldir=/usr</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Normally, the tooldir (the directory where the executables will ultimately
-be located) is set to <filename
-class="directory">$(exec_prefix)/$(target_alias)</filename>. For example, i686
-machines would expand that to <filename
-class="directory">/usr/i686-pc-linux-gnu</filename>. Because this is a custom
-system, this target-specific directory in <filename
-class="directory">/usr</filename> is not required. <filename
-class="directory">$(exec_prefix)/$(target_alias)</filename> would be used if the
-system was used to cross-compile (for example, compiling a package on an Intel
-machine that generates code that can be executed on PowerPC machines).</para>
+  <variablelist>
+    <title>The meaning of the make parameter:</title>
+     <varlistentry>
+      <term><parameter>tooldir=/usr</parameter></term>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>Normally, the tooldir (the directory where the executables will
+        ultimately be located) is set to <filename
+        class="directory">$(exec_prefix)/$(target_alias)</filename>. For
+        example, i686 machines would expand that to <filename
+        class="directory">/usr/i686-pc-linux-gnu</filename>. Because this is
+        a custom system, this target-specific directory in <filename
+        class="directory">/usr</filename> is not required. <filename
+        class="directory">$(exec_prefix)/$(target_alias)</filename> would be
+        used if the system was used to cross-compile (for example, compiling a
+        package on an Intel machine that generates code that can be executed
+        on PowerPC machines).</para>
+      </listitem>
+    </varlistentry>
+  </variablelist>
 
 <important><para>The test suite for Binutils in this section is
 considered critical. Do not skip it under any
diff --git a/chapter06/changingowner.xml b/chapter06/changingowner.xml
index a22e199c5..618fa40d8 100644
--- a/chapter06/changingowner.xml
+++ b/chapter06/changingowner.xml
@@ -32,9 +32,8 @@ command:</para>
 
 <para>The command uses <parameter>0:0</parameter> instead of
 <parameter>root:root</parameter>, because <command>chown</command>
-is unable to resolve the name <quote>root</quote> until the password
-file has been created. This book assumes you ran this
-<command>chown</command> command.</para>
+is unable to resolve the name <quote>root</quote> until the
+<filename>passwd</filename> file has been created.</para>
 
 </sect1>
 
diff --git a/chapter06/strippingagain.xml b/chapter06/strippingagain.xml
index 7a4090fd3..af1352e04 100644
--- a/chapter06/strippingagain.xml
+++ b/chapter06/strippingagain.xml
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ debug the software fully anymore.</para>
 experience any difficulties. However, it is easy to make a typo and
 render the new system unusable, so before running the 
 <command>strip</command> command, it is a good idea to make a
-backup of the current situation.</para>
+backup of the LFS system in its current state.</para>
 
 <para>Before performing the stripping, take special care to ensure that
 none of the binaries that are about to be stripped are running. If
diff --git a/chapter06/vim.xml b/chapter06/vim.xml
index bd21f2f32..d58dbb6b7 100644
--- a/chapter06/vim.xml
+++ b/chapter06/vim.xml
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ url="&blfs-root;view/svn/postlfs/editors.html#postlfs-editors-vim"/>.</para>
 </sect2>
 
 <sect2 id="conf-vim" role="configuration"><title>Configuring Vim</title>
-<indexterm zone="conf-vim"><primary sortas="e-/etc/vim">/etc/vim</primary></indexterm>
+<indexterm zone="conf-vim"><primary sortas="e-/etc/vimrc">/etc/vimrc</primary></indexterm>
 
 <para>By default, <command>vim</command> runs in vi-incompatible mode. This may
 be new to users who have used other editors in the past. The
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