From 5763f6758eff4e014e353fca57c2064915c46544 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Alex Gronenwoud <alex@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Mon, 3 Nov 2003 22:47:39 +0000
Subject: Fixing some tiny typos, and rephrasing a few more lines.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@3056 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml | 2 +-
 chapter06/bzip2.xml              | 4 ++--
 chapter06/gcc-2953.xml           | 2 +-
 chapter06/grub.xml               | 4 ++--
 chapter06/gzip.xml               | 7 ++++---
 chapter06/kbd.xml                | 2 +-
 chapter06/texinfo.xml            | 2 +-
 7 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter06')

diff --git a/chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml b/chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml
index 4c587ae68..a5606ad54 100644
--- a/chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml
+++ b/chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 <para>Now that the new C libraries have been installed, it's time to re-adjust
 our toolchain. We'll adjust it so that it will link any newly compiled program
 against the new C libraries. Basically, this is the reverse of what we did
-in the "Locking in" stage in the beginning of the previous chapter.</para>
+in the "locking in" stage in the beginning of the previous chapter.</para>
 
 <para>The first thing to do is to adjust the linker. For this we retained the
 source and build directories from the second pass over Binutils. Install the
diff --git a/chapter06/bzip2.xml b/chapter06/bzip2.xml
index bc032f049..6b1c4f695 100644
--- a/chapter06/bzip2.xml
+++ b/chapter06/bzip2.xml
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ make clean</userinput></screen>
 <para>The <emphasis>-f</emphasis> flag will cause Bzip2 to be built
 using a different <filename>Makefile</filename> file, in this case the
 <filename>Makefile-libbz2_so</filename> file, which creates a dynamic
-<filename>libbz2.so</filename> library and links the bzip2 utilities
+<filename>libbz2.so</filename> library and links the Bzip2 utilities
 against it.</para>
 
 <para>Compile the package:</para>
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ against it.</para>
 
 <para>And install the shared <userinput>bzip2</userinput> binary into the
 <filename class="directory">/bin</filename> directory, then make some
-necessary symbolic links, and clean up.</para>
+necessary symbolic links, and clean up:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cp bzip2-shared /bin/bzip2
 cp -a libbz2.so* /lib
diff --git a/chapter06/gcc-2953.xml b/chapter06/gcc-2953.xml
index f0f196ada..5071ad4ce 100644
--- a/chapter06/gcc-2953.xml
+++ b/chapter06/gcc-2953.xml
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ directory in a dedicated build directory:</para>
 <screen><userinput>mkdir ../gcc-2-build
 cd ../gcc-2-build</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Compile and install gcc:</para>
+<para>Compile and install the compiler:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>../gcc-2.95.3/configure --prefix=/opt/gcc-2.95.3 \
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;--enable-shared --enable-languages=c \
diff --git a/chapter06/grub.xml b/chapter06/grub.xml
index 431715f8d..929e2310b 100644
--- a/chapter06/grub.xml
+++ b/chapter06/grub.xml
@@ -19,11 +19,11 @@ have defined any environment variables that override default optimizations,
 such as CFLAGS and CXXFLAGS, we recommend unsetting them when building
 Grub.</para>
 
-<para>Grub needs a patch to fix a compilation problem with GCC-&gcc-version;</para>
+<para>First fix a compilation problem with GCC-&gcc-version;:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&grub-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Prepare Grub for compilation:</para>
+<para>Now prepare Grub for compilation:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr</userinput></screen>
 
diff --git a/chapter06/gzip.xml b/chapter06/gzip.xml
index c5a65e9b0..a0ef7800b 100644
--- a/chapter06/gzip.xml
+++ b/chapter06/gzip.xml
@@ -17,9 +17,10 @@ Estimated required disk space:  &gzip-compsize;</screen>
 
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>The gzexe program has the location of the gzip binary hard-wired into
-it.  Because we later change the location of this binary, the following
-command will place the new location into the gzexe binary.</para>
+<para>The <userinput>gzexe</userinput> program has the location of the
+<userinput>gzip</userinput> binary hard-wired into it. Because we later change
+the location of this latter binary, the following command assures that the new
+location gets placed into the binary:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cp gzexe.in{,.backup}
 sed 's%"BINDIR"%/bin%' gzexe.in.backup &gt; gzexe.in</userinput></screen>
diff --git a/chapter06/kbd.xml b/chapter06/kbd.xml
index 33eb1d71c..14b20f15a 100644
--- a/chapter06/kbd.xml
+++ b/chapter06/kbd.xml
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ Estimated required disk space:  &kbd-compsize;</screen>
 
 <para>By default some of Kbd's utilities (<userinput>setlogcons</userinput>,
 <userinput>setvesablank</userinput> and <userinput>getunimap</userinput>) are
-not installed . The patch enables the compilation of these utilities:</para>
+not installed. First enable the compilation of these utilities:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&kbd-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
diff --git a/chapter06/texinfo.xml b/chapter06/texinfo.xml
index a00d157eb..a3d5cadd2 100644
--- a/chapter06/texinfo.xml
+++ b/chapter06/texinfo.xml
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ following command will do so:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make TEXMF=/usr/share/texmf install-tex</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>The meaning of the make option:</para>
+<para>The meaning of the make parameter:</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
 <listitem><para><userinput>TEXMF=/usr/share/texmf</userinput>: The TEXMF
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