From 75128f91c34fb8a4f08b8e573ea05f1b9c1cefb6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Fri, 15 Aug 2014 23:04:08 +0000
Subject: Remove redundant wording when checking toolchain values. Reword
 bootscripts README file. Remove reference to mudflap

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@10693 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter06/adjusting.xml | 23 +++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter06')

diff --git a/chapter06/adjusting.xml b/chapter06/adjusting.xml
index 933bebb44..f6b00971d 100644
--- a/chapter06/adjusting.xml
+++ b/chapter06/adjusting.xml
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ ln -sv /tools/bin/ld /tools/$(gcc -dumpmachine)/bin/ld</userinput></screen>
 cc dummy.c -v -Wl,--verbose &amp;&gt; dummy.log
 readelf -l a.out | grep ': /lib'</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para os="b">If everything is working correctly, there should be no errors,
+  <para os="b">There should be no errors,
   and the output of the last command will be (allowing for
   platform-specific differences in dynamic linker name):</para>
 
@@ -59,8 +59,7 @@ readelf -l a.out | grep ': /lib'</userinput></screen>
 
 <screen os="e"><userinput>grep -o '/usr/lib.*/crt[1in].*succeeded' dummy.log</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para os="f">If everything is working correctly, there should be no errors,
-    and the output of the last command will be:</para>
+  <para os="f">The output of the last command should be:</para>
 
 <screen><computeroutput>/usr/lib/crt1.o succeeded
 /usr/lib/crti.o succeeded
@@ -71,7 +70,7 @@ readelf -l a.out | grep ': /lib'</userinput></screen>
 
 <screen><userinput>grep -B1 '^ /usr/include' dummy.log</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para os="h">This command should return successfully with the following output:</para>
+  <para os="h">This command should return the following output:</para>
 
 <screen><computeroutput>#include &lt;...&gt; search starts here:
  /usr/include</computeroutput></screen>
@@ -80,9 +79,7 @@ readelf -l a.out | grep ': /lib'</userinput></screen>
 
 <screen os="j"><userinput>grep 'SEARCH.*/usr/lib' dummy.log |sed 's|; |\n|g'</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para os="k">If everything is working correctly, there should be no errors,
-  and the output of the last command
-  will be:</para>
+  <para os="k">The output of the last command should be:</para>
 
 <screen><computeroutput>SEARCH_DIR("/usr/lib")
 SEARCH_DIR("/lib");</computeroutput></screen>
@@ -91,9 +88,8 @@ SEARCH_DIR("/lib");</computeroutput></screen>
 
 <screen os="m"><userinput>grep "/lib.*/libc.so.6 " dummy.log</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para os="n">If everything is working correctly, there should be no errors,
-  and the output of the last command (allowing for a lib64 directory on 64-bit hosts)
-  will be:</para>
+  <para os="n">The output of the last command (allowing for a lib64 directory 
+  on 64-bit hosts) should be:</para>
 
 <screen os="o"><computeroutput>attempt to open /lib/libc.so.6 succeeded</computeroutput></screen>
 
@@ -101,10 +97,9 @@ SEARCH_DIR("/lib");</computeroutput></screen>
 
 <screen os="q"><userinput>grep found dummy.log</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para os="r">If everything is working correctly, there should be no errors,
-  and the output of the last command will be (allowing for
-  platform-specific differences in dynamic linker name and a lib64 directory
-  on 64-bit hosts):</para>
+  <para os="r"> The output of the last command should be (allowing for
+  platform-specific differences in dynamic linker name and a lib64 directory on
+  64-bit hosts):</para>
 
 <screen os="s"><computeroutput>found ld-linux.so.2 at /lib/ld-linux.so.2</computeroutput></screen>
 
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