From f4993cfc75b05e310e5c9f4821fec8526ab4701d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Alex Gronenwoud <alex@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Mon, 12 Jan 2004 23:24:06 +0000
Subject: Small textual adjustments.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@3162 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter06/bash.xml      |  2 +-
 chapter06/findutils.xml | 11 +++++------
 chapter06/inetutils.xml | 16 ++++++++--------
 3 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter06')

diff --git a/chapter06/bash.xml b/chapter06/bash.xml
index b0c6611eb..52e95dace 100644
--- a/chapter06/bash.xml
+++ b/chapter06/bash.xml
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ patch:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&bash-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Prepare Bash for compilation:</para>
+<para>Now prepare Bash for compilation:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --bindir=/bin</userinput></screen>
 
diff --git a/chapter06/findutils.xml b/chapter06/findutils.xml
index 4b3ec4d22..1041a20ab 100644
--- a/chapter06/findutils.xml
+++ b/chapter06/findutils.xml
@@ -15,17 +15,16 @@ Estimated required disk space:  &findutils-compsize;</screen>
 <sect2><title>&nbsp;</title><para>&nbsp;</para></sect2>
 
 <sect2>
-<title>Installing Findutils</title>
+<title>Installation of Findutils</title>
 
 <para>Prepare Findutils for compilation:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --libexecdir=/usr/lib/locate</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>By default, the location of the updatedb database is in
-<filename>/usr/var</filename>. To make the location of
-<filename>/var/lib/misc/locatedb</filename> file FHS compliant, pass the
-<emphasis>--localstatedir=/var/lib/misc</emphasis> option to
-<userinput>configure</userinput>.</para>
+<para>The default location for the <emphasis>locate</emphasis> database is
+<filename>/usr/var</filename>. To make the location of this database
+FHS-compliant, add <emphasis>--localstatedir=/var/lib/misc</emphasis>
+to the above configure options.</para>
 
 <para>Compile the package:</para>
 
diff --git a/chapter06/inetutils.xml b/chapter06/inetutils.xml
index c15d82aab..d78416bcd 100644
--- a/chapter06/inetutils.xml
+++ b/chapter06/inetutils.xml
@@ -23,25 +23,25 @@ pages anyway. The following patch will correct this situation:</para>
 
 <para>Now prepare Inetutils for compilation:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --disable-syslogd \
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;--libexecdir=/usr/sbin --disable-logger \
+<screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --libexecdir=/usr/sbin \
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;--sysconfdir=/etc --localstatedir=/var \
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;--disable-logger --disable-syslogd \
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;--disable-whois --disable-servers</userinput></screen>
 
 <para>The meaning of the configure options:</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
-<listitem><para><userinput>--disable-syslogd</userinput>: This option
-prevents inetutils from installing the System Log Daemon, which is
-installed with the Sysklogd package.</para></listitem>
-
 <listitem><para><userinput>--disable-logger</userinput>: This option
-prevents inetutils from installing the logger program, which is used by
+prevents Inetutils from installing the logger program, which is used by
 scripts to pass messages to the System Log Daemon. We do not install it
 because Util-linux installs a better version later.</para></listitem>
 
+<listitem><para><userinput>--disable-syslogd</userinput>: This option
+prevents Inetutils from installing the System Log Daemon, which is
+installed with the Sysklogd package.</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para><userinput>--disable-whois</userinput>: This option disables
-the building of the inetutils whois client, which is woefully out of date.
+the building of the Inetutils whois client, which is woefully out of date.
 Instructions for a better whois client are in the BLFS book.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><userinput>--disable-servers</userinput>: This disables the
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