From fba870f2a5817a9fdf09ea65677d6ea789880dd6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Chris Staub <chris@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Sat, 28 Jun 2014 09:14:27 +0000
Subject: Text updates

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@10587 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter06/automake.xml  | 2 +-
 chapter06/binutils.xml  | 4 ++--
 chapter06/flex.xml      | 2 +-
 chapter06/inetutils.xml | 2 +-
 chapter06/kmod.xml      | 5 ++---
 chapter06/man-pages.xml | 2 +-
 6 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter06')

diff --git a/chapter06/automake.xml b/chapter06/automake.xml
index 117f9c48b..c58cf6184 100644
--- a/chapter06/automake.xml
+++ b/chapter06/automake.xml
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
     <para>There are a couple of tests that incorrectly link to the 
     wrong version of the flex library, so we temporarily work around
     the problem.  Also, using the -j4 make option speeds up the tests, even on
-    systems with only one processor due to internal delays in individual
+    systems with only one processor, due to internal delays in individual
     tests.  To test the results, issue:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="test">sed -i "s:./configure:LEXLIB=/usr/lib/libfl.a &amp;:" t/lex-{clean,depend}-cxx.sh
diff --git a/chapter06/binutils.xml b/chapter06/binutils.xml
index dc3904c9e..e0aefee3f 100644
--- a/chapter06/binutils.xml
+++ b/chapter06/binutils.xml
@@ -64,8 +64,8 @@ Ask your system administrator to create more.</computeroutput></screen>
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">rm -fv etc/standards.info
 sed -i.bak '/^INFO/s/standards.info //' etc/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Add an upstream patch to use gcc's link time optimization (LTO) 
-    the default:</para>
+    <para>Add an upstream patch to use GCC's link time optimization (LTO) 
+    by default:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">patch -Np1 -i ../&binutils-lto-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
diff --git a/chapter06/flex.xml b/chapter06/flex.xml
index 8ad7040a9..725bc21f8 100644
--- a/chapter06/flex.xml
+++ b/chapter06/flex.xml
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Flex</title>
 
-    <para>First, skip running three regression tests that require bison.</para>
+    <para>First, skip running three regression tests that require Bison:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i -e '/test-bison/d' tests/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
 
diff --git a/chapter06/inetutils.xml b/chapter06/inetutils.xml
index 639d04da9..7cb9b6b5b 100644
--- a/chapter06/inetutils.xml
+++ b/chapter06/inetutils.xml
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
     <title>Installation of Inetutils</title>
 
     <para>Create a definition to allow the <command>ifconfig</command> program
-    to build properly.</para>
+    to build properly:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">echo '#define PATH_PROCNET_DEV "/proc/net/dev"' &gt;&gt; ifconfig/system/linux.h </userinput></screen>
 
diff --git a/chapter06/kmod.xml b/chapter06/kmod.xml
index 75fa028a0..cc0549d42 100644
--- a/chapter06/kmod.xml
+++ b/chapter06/kmod.xml
@@ -78,10 +78,9 @@
 
 <screen><userinput remap="test">make check</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Install the package, man pages, and create symlinks for
+    <para>Install the package and man pages, and create symlinks for
     compatibility with Module-Init-Tools (the package that previously handled
-    Linux kernel modules).  Also make sure that all libraries are in the
-    correct directory: </para>
+    Linux kernel modules):</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">make install
 
diff --git a/chapter06/man-pages.xml b/chapter06/man-pages.xml
index 11256800c..3d2c52046 100644
--- a/chapter06/man-pages.xml
+++ b/chapter06/man-pages.xml
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
   <sect2 role="package">
     <title/>
 
-    <para>The Man-pages package contains over 1,900 man pages.</para>
+    <para>The Man-pages package contains over 2,200 man pages.</para>
 
     <segmentedlist>
       <segtitle>&buildtime;</segtitle>
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