From fe6ca49e2b1ba60895c1e33ffdf2d5e119eb21d3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Matthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Sat, 18 Jul 2009 12:42:44 +0000
Subject: Apply a few text updates from Chris Staub. Fixes #2442.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@8965 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter06/bison.xml    | 4 ++--
 chapter06/sysvinit.xml | 6 +++---
 chapter06/vim.xml      | 4 ++--
 3 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter06')

diff --git a/chapter06/bison.xml b/chapter06/bison.xml
index 0d8a5ac30..9721be123 100644
--- a/chapter06/bison.xml
+++ b/chapter06/bison.xml
@@ -44,9 +44,9 @@
 
 <screen><userinput remap="configure">./configure --prefix=/usr</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>The configure system causes bison to be built without support for
+    <para>The configure system causes Bison to be built without support for
     internationalization of error messages if a <command>bison</command>
-    program is not already in $PATH.  The following addition will correct
+    program is not already in $PATH. The following addition will correct
     this:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="configure">echo '#define YYENABLE_NLS 1' &gt;&gt; config.h</userinput></screen>
diff --git a/chapter06/sysvinit.xml b/chapter06/sysvinit.xml
index aee6a6861..4fae9b6be 100644
--- a/chapter06/sysvinit.xml
+++ b/chapter06/sysvinit.xml
@@ -55,9 +55,9 @@
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i 's@Sending processes@&amp; configured via /etc/inittab@g' \
     src/init.c</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>A maintained version of the <command>wall</command> program is
-    installed later on during the Util-linux-ng installation. Suppress the
-    installation of this program and its man page:</para>
+    <para>A maintained version of the <command>wall</command> program was
+    installed earlier by Util-linux-ng. Suppress the installation of Sysvinit's
+    version of this program and its man page:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="make">sed -i -e 's/utmpdump wall/utmpdump/' \
        -e 's/mountpoint.1 wall.1/mountpoint.1/' src/Makefile</userinput></screen>
diff --git a/chapter06/vim.xml b/chapter06/vim.xml
index 67d873a1a..2132424bb 100644
--- a/chapter06/vim.xml
+++ b/chapter06/vim.xml
@@ -85,10 +85,10 @@
         <term><parameter>--enable-multibyte</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
           <para>This switch enables support for editing files in multibyte
-          character encodings.  This is needed if using a locale with a
+          character encodings. This is needed if using a locale with a
           multibyte character set. This switch is also helpful to be able
           to edit text files initially created in Linux distributions like
-          Fedora Core that use UTF-8 as a default character set.</para>
+          Fedora that use UTF-8 as a default character set.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
 
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