From ebecd08c0582ef9c01f784452f87f3a39cf40cdd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com>
Date: Wed, 16 Nov 2022 13:15:01 -0600
Subject: Corrected grammar, spelling, and idiom in chapter 7.

---
 chapter07/chroot.xml | 24 ++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter07/chroot.xml')

diff --git a/chapter07/chroot.xml b/chapter07/chroot.xml
index 6404c0625..69bc6ce69 100644
--- a/chapter07/chroot.xml
+++ b/chapter07/chroot.xml
@@ -11,11 +11,11 @@
   <title>Entering the Chroot Environment</title>
 
   <para>Now that all the packages which are required to build the rest of the
-  needed tools are on the system, it is time to enter the chroot environment to
-  finish installing the remaining temporary tools. This environment will be in
-  use also for installing the final system. As user <systemitem
+  needed tools are on the system, it is time to enter the chroot environment and
+  finish installing the temporary tools. This environment will also be
+  used to install the final system. As user <systemitem
   class="username">root</systemitem>, run the following command to enter the
-  environment that is, at the moment, populated with only the temporary
+  environment that is, at the moment, populated with nothing but temporary
   tools:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>chroot "$LFS" /usr/bin/env -i   \
@@ -26,25 +26,25 @@
     /bin/bash --login</userinput></screen>
 
   <para>The <parameter>-i</parameter> option given to the <command>env</command>
-  command will clear all variables of the chroot environment. After that, only
+  command will clear all the variables in the chroot environment. After that, only
   the <envar>HOME</envar>, <envar>TERM</envar>, <envar>PS1</envar>, and
   <envar>PATH</envar> variables are set again. The
-  <parameter>TERM=$TERM</parameter> construct will set the <envar>TERM</envar>
+  <parameter>TERM=$TERM</parameter> construct sets the <envar>TERM</envar>
   variable inside chroot to the same value as outside chroot. This variable is
-  needed for programs like <command>vim</command> and <command>less</command>
-  to operate properly.  If other variables are desired, such as
+  needed so programs like <command>vim</command> and <command>less</command>
+  can operate properly.  If other variables are desired, such as
   <envar>CFLAGS</envar> or <envar>CXXFLAGS</envar>, this is a good place to set
-  them again.</para>
+  them.</para>
 
   <para>From this point on, there is no need to use the
-  <envar>LFS</envar> variable anymore because all work will be restricted
-  to the LFS file system.  This is because the Bash shell is told that
+  <envar>LFS</envar> variable any more because all work will be restricted
+  to the LFS file system; the <command>chroot</command> command tells the Bash shell that
   <filename class="directory">$LFS</filename> is now the root
   (<filename class="directory">/</filename>) directory.</para>
 
   <para>Notice that <filename class="directory">/tools/bin</filename> is not
   in the <envar>PATH</envar>. This means that the cross toolchain will no longer be
-  used in the chroot environment.</para>
+  used.</para>
 
   <para>Note that the <command>bash</command> prompt will say
   <computeroutput>I have no name!</computeroutput> This is normal because the
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