From 387a32af4bff50363c15788cf25f10ed26cfabd3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Thu, 11 Jun 2020 03:13:43 +0000
Subject: Update initial Chapter 7 pages for cross2 branch

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11918 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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 chapter07/createfiles.xml | 24 ++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter07/createfiles.xml')

diff --git a/chapter07/createfiles.xml b/chapter07/createfiles.xml
index aed8d79da..3f5698438 100644
--- a/chapter07/createfiles.xml
+++ b/chapter07/createfiles.xml
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ nobody:x:99:99:Unprivileged User:/dev/null:/bin/false</literal>
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
   <para>The actual password for <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>
-  (the <quote>x</quote> used here is just a placeholder) will be set later.</para>
+  will be set later.</para>
 
   <para>Create the <filename>/etc/group</filename> file by running the following
   command:</para>
@@ -145,16 +145,16 @@ users:x:999:</literal>
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
   <para>The created groups are not part of any standard&mdash;they are groups
-  decided on in part by the requirements of the Udev configuration in the next
-  chapter, and in part by common convention employed by a number of existing
-  Linux distributions. In addition, some test suites rely on specific users
-  or groups.  The Linux Standard Base (LSB, available at <ulink
-  url="http://www.linuxbase.org"/>) recommends only that, besides the group
-  <systemitem class="groupname">root</systemitem> with a Group ID (GID) of 0,
-  a group <systemitem class="groupname">bin</systemitem> with a GID of 1 be
-  present. All other group names and GIDs can be chosen freely by the system
-  administrator since well-written programs do not depend on GID numbers, but
-  rather use the group's name.</para>
+  decided on in part by the requirements of the Udev configuration in Chapter
+  9, and in part by common convention employed by a number of existing Linux
+  distributions. In addition, some test suites rely on specific users or
+  groups.  The Linux Standard Base (LSB, available at <ulink
+  url="http://refspecs.linuxfoundation.org/lsb.shtml"/>) only recommends that,
+  besides the group <systemitem class="groupname">root</systemitem> with a
+  Group ID (GID) of 0, a group <systemitem class="groupname">bin</systemitem>
+  with a GID of 1 be present. All other group names and GIDs can be chosen
+  freely by the system administrator since well-written programs do not depend
+  on GID numbers, but rather use the group's name.</para>
 
   <para>Some tests in <xref linkend="chapter-building-system"/> need a regular
   user. We add this user here and delete this account at the end of that
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ install -o tester -d /home/tester</userinput></screen>
   directive, <command>bash</command> would remember the paths to binaries it has
   executed. To ensure the use of the newly compiled binaries as soon as they are
   installed, the <parameter>+h</parameter> directive will be used for the duration
-  of this chapter.</para>
+  of this and the next chapter.</para>
 
   <para>The <command>login</command>, <command>agetty</command>, and
   <command>init</command> programs (and others) use a number of log
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