From fa914e596245dfff0d0424b3bdffd6f762b40e19 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Gerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Wed, 29 Aug 2001 19:50:53 +0000
Subject: text updates

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@1114 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter07/hosts.xml | 15 +++++++--------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter07/hosts.xml')

diff --git a/chapter07/hosts.xml b/chapter07/hosts.xml
index d3ae0c6b7..dbeb337d1 100644
--- a/chapter07/hosts.xml
+++ b/chapter07/hosts.xml
@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
 <sect1 id="ch07-hosts">
 <title>Creating the /etc/hosts file</title>
 
-<para>If a network card is to be configured, a user has to decide on the
+<para>If a network card is to be configured, you have to decide on the
 IP-address, FQDN and possible aliases for use in the /etc/hosts file. An
 example is:</para>
 
 <para><screen>&lt;my-IP&gt; myhost.mydomain.org aliases</screen></para>
 
-<para>It should made sure that the IP-address is in the private network
+<para>You should made sure that the IP-address is in the private network
 IP-address range. Valid ranges are:</para>
 
 <para><screen>	Class Networks
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ IP-address range. Valid ranges are:</para>
 <para>A valid IP address could be 192.168.1.1. A valid FQDN for this IP could
 be www.linuxfromscratch.org</para>
 
-<para>If a user is not going to use a network card, he still needs to 
+<para>If you aren't going to use a network card, you still need to 
 come up with a FQDN. This is necessary for programs like Sendmail to operate 
 correctly (in fact; Sendmail won't run when it can't determine the FQDN).</para>
 
@@ -45,11 +45,10 @@ correctly (in fact; Sendmail won't run when it can't determine the FQDN).</para>
 # End /etc/hosts (network card version)
 <userinput>EOF</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>Of course, the 192.168.1.1 and www.mydomain.org have to be changed to the 
-users 
-liking (or requirements if assigned an IP-address by a network/system
-administrator and this machine is planned to be 
-connected to that network).</para>
+<para>Of course, the 192.168.1.1 and www.mydomain.org have to be changed
+to your liking (or requirements if assigned an IP-address by a network/system
+administrator and this machine is planned to be connected to that 
+network).</para>
 
 </sect1>
 
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