From 137bd506ad66d6c67186a63b30abd3c626e5a66d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Thomas Balu Walter <tw@itreff.de>
Date: Sun, 18 Mar 2001 20:39:49 +0000
Subject: You's

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@335 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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 chapter07/network.xml | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter07/network.xml')

diff --git a/chapter07/network.xml b/chapter07/network.xml
index 603c61b55..64d61bd04 100644
--- a/chapter07/network.xml
+++ b/chapter07/network.xml
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <title>Creating the /etc/sysconfig/network file</title>
 
 <para>
-Create a new file <filename>/etc/sysconfig/network</filename> and put the 
-hostname in it by running:
+A new file <filename>/etc/sysconfig/network</filename> is created and the 
+hostname is put in it by running:
 </para>
 
 <blockquote><literallayout>
@@ -13,8 +13,9 @@ hostname in it by running:
 </literallayout></blockquote>
 
 <para>
-Replace <quote>lfs</quote> by the name you wish to call your computer.
-Please not that you should not enter the FQDN (Fully Qualified Domain
+<quote>lfs</quote> needs to be replaced by the name the computer is to be 
+called.
+A user should not enter the FQDN (Fully Qualified Domain
 Name) here. That information will be put in the
 <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file later.
 </para>
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