From e787b1fe1487300d51ec7be69d3f98957c137453 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Fri, 27 May 2016 19:55:47 +0000
Subject: Update to dbus-1.10.8. Update to e2fsprogs-1.43. Update to gdbm-1.12.
 Update to iproute2-4.6.0. Update to make-4.2. Update to systemd-230.

Add additional explanatory text for sytemctl and journalctl commands.
[chapter07/systemd-custom.xml]



git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/merge@11078 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter07/chapter07.xml      |  1 +
 chapter07/systemd-custom.xml | 17 +++++++++--------
 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter07')

diff --git a/chapter07/chapter07.xml b/chapter07/chapter07.xml
index e3cdcd721..e40e9c627 100644
--- a/chapter07/chapter07.xml
+++ b/chapter07/chapter07.xml
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
 
   <title>System Configuration and Bootscripts</title>
 
+  <!-- sysv -->
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="introduction.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="bootscripts.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="udev.xml"/>
diff --git a/chapter07/systemd-custom.xml b/chapter07/systemd-custom.xml
index 3f2f84f3f..26f29beb4 100644
--- a/chapter07/systemd-custom.xml
+++ b/chapter07/systemd-custom.xml
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ EOF</userinput></screen>
   <sect2>
     <title>Overriding Default Services Behavior</title>
 
-    <para>A systemd service contents can be overriden by creating a directory
+    <para>The parameter of a unit can be overriden by creating a directory
     and a configuration file in <filename
     class="directory">/etc/systemd/system</filename>. For example:</para>
 
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ EOF</userinput></screen>
     <title>Debugging the Boot Sequence</title>
 
     <para>Rather than plain shell scripts used in SysVinit or BSD style init
-    systems, systemd uses a unified format for different type of startup
+    systems, systemd uses a unified format for different types of startup
     files (or units). The command <command>systemctl</command> is used to
     enable, disable, controll state, and obtain status of unit files. Here 
     are some examples of frequently used commands:</para>
@@ -143,12 +143,13 @@ EOF</userinput></screen>
   <sect2>
     <title>Working with the Systemd Journal</title>
 
-    <para>Logging on a system booted with systemd is handled by
-    systemd-journald (default), rather than a typical unix syslog daemon. 
-    systemd-journald write log entries to a binary file format, rather than
-    a plain text log file. To assist with parsing the file, the command
-    <command>journalctl</command> is provided. Here are some examples of
-    frequently used commands:</para>
+    <para>Logging on a system booted with systemd is handled with
+    systemd-journald (by default), rather than a typical unix syslog daemon.
+    You can also add a normal syslog daemon and have both work side by
+    side if desired. The systemd-journald program stores journal entries in a
+    binary format rather than a plain text log file. To assist with
+    parsing the file, the command <command>journalctl</command> is provided.
+    Here are some examples of frequently used commands:</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
        <listitem>
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