From 69854d2a873d74a7956e34d3f29f28aafa5c07f7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: David Bryant <david@davidcbryant.net>
Date: Wed, 25 Jan 2023 13:10:44 -0600
Subject: Edit systemd chapters for grammar and idiom.

---
 chapter08/dbus.xml | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter08/dbus.xml')

diff --git a/chapter08/dbus.xml b/chapter08/dbus.xml
index 71a93e5cb..8f3c80f7a 100644
--- a/chapter08/dbus.xml
+++ b/chapter08/dbus.xml
@@ -67,9 +67,9 @@
           <parameter>--with-system-socket=/run/dbus/system_bus_socket</parameter>
         </term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>These set the location of the PID file and the system bus socket
+          <para>These cause the PID file and the system bus socket
           to be in <filename class="directory">/run</filename>, instead of
-          deprecated <filename class="directory">/var/run</filename>.</para>
+          the deprecated <filename class="directory">/var/run</filename>.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
 
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