From 9e7475a6c30cbc40d2cf69118ea65d682189b091 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Douglas R. Reno" <renodr@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Fri, 12 Jun 2020 21:04:48 +0000
Subject: Updates to chapter09 for systemd

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11929 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter08/dbus.xml | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter08/dbus.xml')

diff --git a/chapter08/dbus.xml b/chapter08/dbus.xml
index 0b06ad3e0..211399207 100644
--- a/chapter08/dbus.xml
+++ b/chapter08/dbus.xml
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
       <varlistentry>
         <term><parameter>--with-console-auth-dir=/run/console</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This specifies the location of the ConsoleKit auth
+          <para>This specifies the location of the ConsoleKit authorization
           directory.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@
 <screen><userinput remap="install">mv -v /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so.* /lib
 ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Create a symlink, so that D-Bus and systemd can use the same
+    <para>Create a symlink so that D-Bus and systemd can use the same
     <filename>machine-id</filename> file:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">ln -sfv /etc/machine-id /var/lib/dbus</userinput></screen>
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</useri
       <varlistentry id="dbus-cleanup-sockets">
         <term><command>dbus-cleanup-sockets</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Used to clean up leftover sockets in a directory</para>
+          <para>is used to remove leftover sockets in a directory</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-cleanup-sockets">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-cleanup-sockets">dbus-cleanup-sockets</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</useri
       <varlistentry id="dbus-daemon">
         <term><command>dbus-daemon</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>The D-Bus message bus daemon</para>
+          <para>Is the D-Bus message bus daemon</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-daemon">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-daemon">dbus-daemon</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</useri
       <varlistentry id="dbus-test-tool">
         <term><command>dbus-test-tool</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>A tool to help packages test
+          <para>Is a tool to help packages test
           <application>D-Bus</application></para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-test-tool">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-test-tool">dbus-test-tool</primary>
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