From 6a156bab1b41dfcbebcf69325dff81b73a2afad7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Fri, 12 Jun 2020 04:40:07 +0000
Subject: Mostly text updates in Chapter 8. There are a couple of minor command
 changes.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11924 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter08/kbd.xml | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter08/kbd.xml')

diff --git a/chapter08/kbd.xml b/chapter08/kbd.xml
index 7d85e4db5..a219102eb 100644
--- a/chapter08/kbd.xml
+++ b/chapter08/kbd.xml
@@ -41,21 +41,21 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Kbd</title>
 
-    <para>The behaviour of the Backspace and Delete keys is not consistent
+    <para>The behaviour of the backspace and delete keys is not consistent
     across the keymaps in the Kbd package. The following patch fixes this
     issue for i386 keymaps:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">patch -Np1 -i ../&kbd-backspace-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>After patching, the Backspace key generates the character with code 127,
-    and the Delete key generates a well-known escape sequence.</para>
+    <para>After patching, the backspace key generates the character with code 127,
+    and the delete key generates a well-known escape sequence.</para>
 
     <para>Remove the redundant <command>resizecons</command> program (it requires
     the defunct svgalib to provide the video mode files - for normal use
     <command>setfont</command> sizes the console appropriately) together with its
     manpage.</para>
 
-<screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i 's/\(RESIZECONS_PROGS=\)yes/\1no/g' configure
+<screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i '/RESIZECONS_PROGS=/s/yes/no/' configure
 sed -i 's/resizecons.8 //' docs/man/man8/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Prepare Kbd for compilation:</para>
@@ -63,12 +63,12 @@ sed -i 's/resizecons.8 //' docs/man/man8/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
 <screen><userinput remap="configure">./configure --prefix=/usr --disable-vlock</userinput></screen>
 
     <variablelist>
-      <title>The meaning of the configure options:</title>
+      <title>The meaning of the configure option:</title>
 
       <varlistentry>
         <term><parameter>--disable-vlock</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This option prevents the vlock utility from being built, as it
+          <para>This option prevents the vlock utility from being built because it
           requires the PAM library, which isn't available in the chroot
           environment.</para>
        </listitem>
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ sed -i 's/resizecons.8 //' docs/man/man8/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>If desired, install the documentation:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput remap="install">mkdir -v       /usr/share/doc/kbd-&kbd-version;
+<screen><userinput remap="install">mkdir -v            /usr/share/doc/kbd-&kbd-version;
 cp -R -v docs/doc/* /usr/share/doc/kbd-&kbd-version;</userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>
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