From 2bdc67d17847ca6c6eddee2c1af0f3c80a2aad64 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Gerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Wed, 29 Aug 2001 20:01:45 +0000
Subject: Text updates

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@1115 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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 chapter08/lilo.xml | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter08/lilo.xml')

diff --git a/chapter08/lilo.xml b/chapter08/lilo.xml
index 1c57dada6..6425bccc4 100644
--- a/chapter08/lilo.xml
+++ b/chapter08/lilo.xml
@@ -26,25 +26,25 @@ image=/boot/lfskernel
         read-only
 <userinput>EOF</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>&lt;partition&gt; must be replaced by the LFS 
+<para>&lt;partition&gt; must be replaced with the LFS 
 partition's designation.</para>
 
 <para>Also note that if you are using reiserfs for your root partition,
 the line <userinput>read-only</userinput> should be changed to
 <userinput>read-write</userinput>.</para>
 
-<para>Now the boot loader gets updated by running:</para>
+<para>Now, update the boot loader by running:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>/sbin/lilo</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>The last step is syncing the host system lilo config. files with the
-LFS system:</para>
+<para>The last step is synchronizing the host system's lilo
+configuration files with the LFS system's:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>cp /etc/lilo.conf $LFS/etc &amp;&amp;</userinput>
 <userinput>cp &lt;kernel images&gt; $LFS/boot</userinput></screen></para>
 
 <para>To find out which kernel images files are being used, look at the
-/etc/lilo.conf file and find the lines starting with
+/etc/lilo.conf file and look for the lines starting with
 <emphasis>image=</emphasis>. If your host system has kernel files in
 other places than the /boot directory, make sure you update the paths
 in the $LFS/etc/lilo.conf file so that it does look for them in the
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