From 53b5ccf1730f9f481fca06bac949d3ea8dbd61c7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Thomas Balu Walter Date: Mon, 19 Mar 2001 14:30:14 +0000 Subject: You git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@336 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689 --- chapter08/introduction.xml | 4 ++-- chapter08/kernel.xml | 7 ++++--- chapter08/lilo.xml | 6 +++--- chapter08/reboot.xml | 14 +++++++------- 4 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) (limited to 'chapter08') diff --git a/chapter08/introduction.xml b/chapter08/introduction.xml index e64986577..d1c95d498 100644 --- a/chapter08/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter08/introduction.xml @@ -3,8 +3,8 @@ This chapter will make LFS bootable. This chapter deals with building a -new kernel for our new LFS system and adding the proper entries to LILO -so that you can select to boot the LFS system at the LILO: prompt. +new kernel for the new LFS system and adding the proper entries to LILO +so that the LFS system can be selected for booting at the LILO: prompt. diff --git a/chapter08/kernel.xml b/chapter08/kernel.xml index 77db00cda..d60fe0767 100644 --- a/chapter08/kernel.xml +++ b/chapter08/kernel.xml @@ -9,9 +9,10 @@ the most recent kernel sources available. Building the kernel involves a few steps: configuring it and compiling -it. There are a few ways to configure the kernel. If you don't like the -way this book does it, read the README file and find out -what your other options are. Run the following commands to build the +it. There are a few ways to configure the kernel. If a user doesn't like the +way this book does it, he should read the README +file and find out +what the other options are. The following commands are run to build the kernel: diff --git a/chapter08/lilo.xml b/chapter08/lilo.xml index 381f2dc56..c998387b2 100644 --- a/chapter08/lilo.xml +++ b/chapter08/lilo.xml @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ In order to being able to boot from this partition, we need to update our -/etc/lilo.conf file. Add the following lines to lilo.conf by running: +/etc/lilo.conf file. The following lines get added to lilo.conf by running: @@ -18,12 +18,12 @@ image=/boot/lfskernel -<partition> must be replaced by your partition's designation (which +<partition> must be replaced by the partition's designation (which would be /dev/hda5 in my case). -Now update the boot loader by running: +Now the boot loader gets updated by running:
diff --git a/chapter08/reboot.xml b/chapter08/reboot.xml index 4ced41b8f..2a71dd631 100644 --- a/chapter08/reboot.xml +++ b/chapter08/reboot.xml @@ -3,16 +3,16 @@ Now that all software has been installed, bootscripts have been created, -it's time for you to reboot your computer. Shutdown your system with -shutdown -r now and reboot into LFS. After the reboot you will have a normal -login prompt like you have on your normal Linux system (unless you use XDM or -some sort of other Display Manger (like KDM - KDE's version of XDM). +it's time to reboot the computer. The system is shutdown with +shutdown -r now and rebooted into LFS. After the reboot a normal +login prompt like on the normal Linux system comes up (unless XDM or +some sort of other Display Manger is used (like KDM - KDE's version of XDM)). -One thing remains to be done and that's setting up networking. After you -rebooted and finished the next chapter of this book your LFS system is -ready for use and you can do with it whatever you want. +One thing remains to be done and that's setting up networking. After having +rebooted and finished the next chapter of this book the LFS system is +ready for use and can be used to do with it whatever is wanted. -- cgit v1.2.3-54-g00ecf