From a3ebe8aa2b3bd19ec757706269fd7e15e5c9c55b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com>
Date: Thu, 8 Dec 2022 17:23:07 -0600
Subject: Corrected capitalization of the package name. This was hard to do
 because some references appear to refer to the program itself, and not to the
 package. Corrected English idiom here and there.

---
 chapter08/ninja.xml | 24 ++++++++++++------------
 chapter08/wheel.xml |  2 +-
 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter08')

diff --git a/chapter08/ninja.xml b/chapter08/ninja.xml
index 4f3a25e88..7c72b9598 100644
--- a/chapter08/ninja.xml
+++ b/chapter08/ninja.xml
@@ -36,10 +36,10 @@
     </segmentedlist>
 
     <tip revision="sysv">
-      <para>This section is not strictly required for LFS if not using
-      systemd. On the other hand, ninja associated to meson makes
+      <para>This section is not strictly required when LFS does not use
+      systemd. On the other hand, Ninja, along with Meson, makes
       a powerful build system combination,
-      which is expected to be used more and more often. It is required for
+      which will probably be used more and more often. It is required for
       several packages in <ulink url="&blfs-book;">the BLFS
       book</ulink>.</para>
     </tip>
@@ -49,12 +49,12 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Ninja</title>
 
-    <para>When run, ninja normally runs a maximum number of processes
-    in parallel.  By default this is the number of cores on the system
-    plus two.  In some cases this can overheat a CPU or run a system out
-    of memory.  If run from the command line, passing a -jN parameter
-    will limit the number of parallel processes, but some packages
-    embed the execution of ninja and do not pass a -j parameter.</para>
+    <para>When run, ninja normally utilizes the greatest possible number of processes
+    in parallel.  By default this is the number of cores on the system,
+    plus two.  This may overheat the CPU, or make the system run out
+    of memory.  When ninja is invoked from the command line, passing the -jN parameter
+    will limit the number of parallel processes. Some packages
+    embed the execution of ninja, and do not pass the -j parameter on to it.</para>
 
     <para>Using the <emphasis>optional</emphasis> procedure below allows a user to
     limit the number of parallel processes via an environment variable,
@@ -64,8 +64,8 @@
 
     will limit ninja to four parallel processes.</para>
 
-    <para>If desired, add the capability to use the environment variable
-    NINJAJOBS by running:</para>
+    <para>If desired, make ninja recognize the environment variable
+    NINJAJOBS by running the stream editor:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i '/int Guess/a \
   int   j = 0;\
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
       <varlistentry>
         <term><parameter>--bootstrap</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This parameter forces ninja to rebuild itself for the current
+          <para>This parameter forces Ninja to rebuild itself for the current
           system.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
diff --git a/chapter08/wheel.xml b/chapter08/wheel.xml
index 7ab14426a..57457dacc 100644
--- a/chapter08/wheel.xml
+++ b/chapter08/wheel.xml
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@
         <term><command>wheel</command></term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a utility to unpack, pack, or convert wheel packages
+            is a utility to unpack, pack, or convert wheel archives
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-wheel">
             <primary sortas="b-wheel">wheel</primary>
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